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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter a Invite him her to a public event in your country b Describe the public event c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he she will visit v.1

Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter a Invite him her to a public event in your country b Describe the public event c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he she will visit v. 1
It is irrefutable that in recent time, work-life balance has improved drastically. It is often considered that eminent people had little or no social life, they provided their undivided attention to work. I consider having a balanced life rather than occupying myself with work. In this essay, I will present my view with examples. The most significant advantage of a balanced work-life is a healthy lifestyle. Nowadays, people are so occupied with work, neglecting health and family. To illustrate, as per the Doctor's Association of North America, exercises and children's are the biggest stress-busters in the world. In contrast, individual's neglect them and consider work as a priority. It is because, they are busy making a mark for themselves. As a result, they lose health, and family, to achieve success in professional life. Another important aspect of having a balance life is getting rid of stress. In recent times, everyone is occupied with work, a lot more than in the past. People need to move out of their busy life, in order to reduce stress and rejuvenate themselves. For example, it has been evaluated by the United Nations, people who travel often are more productive. Also, this eradicates the possibility of mental illness. As an outcome, it spreads joy and happiness and remove stress from day to day life. In conclusion, although creating a goal for oneself is great. In my opinion, providing sufficient time for family and taking vacations is a must in current world. This does help in creating a perfect balance in life.
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improved
drastically
. It is
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often
considered that eminent
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people
had
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little
or no social
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life
, they provided their undivided attention to
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work
. I consider having a balanced
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life
rather
than occupying myself with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
. In this essay, I will present my view with examples.

The most significant advantage of a balanced work-life is a healthy lifestyle. Nowadays,
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people
are
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so
occupied with
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work
, neglecting health and family. To illustrate, as per the Doctor's Association of North America, exercises and children's are the biggest
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stress
-busters in the world.
In contrast
, individual's neglect them and consider
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work
as a priority. It is
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because
, they are busy making a mark for themselves.
As a result
, they lose health, and family, to achieve success in professional life.

Another
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important
aspect of having a balance
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life
is getting rid of
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stress
. In recent times, everyone
is occupied
with
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work
, a lot more than in the past.
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People
need to
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move
out of their busy
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life
, in order to
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reduce
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stress
and rejuvenate themselves.
For example
, it has
been evaluated
by the United Nations,
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people
who travel
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often
are more productive.
Also
, this eradicates the possibility of mental illness. As an outcome, it spreads joy and happiness and remove
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stress
from day to day life.

In conclusion
, although creating a goal for oneself is great. In my opinion, providing sufficient time for family and taking vacations is a
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must
in
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current
world. This does
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help
in creating a perfect balance in
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life
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter a Invite him her to a public event in your country b Describe the public event c Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he she will visit v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
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