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You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you we v.1

You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you we v. 1
Some scholars have to make money for learning that has several consequences: students do not have enough time and feel stressful. In this essay I am going to describe the main causes of this issue and possible solutions. There are two main following reasons for employment while studying: some students do not have the needed funds and they want to develop practical skills. As long as some gifted people could come from poor families, they will try to earn money to pay for the education they desire to achieve. For example, in the history of humanity, there are some celebrities who came from a poor background and achieved prosperity by working while achieving education as it was with Milla Jovovich. Another reason is related to the necessity of special qualities for future occupation. Therefore, working as an assistant near experts can help to develop the important features in future employees. For instance, some universities employ medical students in some scientific projects which help followers to apply theory in practice. To solve this problem could be proposed two specific recommendations. The first solution is part-time employment that occupies a little interval of the student so that they can fill their spare time by studying. The second solution is online types of works which definitely will save precious period of the learners as well as their cash. In conclusion, lack of capital and practical skills pushes students to work during studying. However, it is possible to minimize the negative effects of this problem by giving them fractional load or remote kinds of jobs.
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scholars
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have to
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make
money for learning that has several consequences:
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students
do not have
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enough
time and feel stressful. In this essay I am going to
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describe
the main causes of this issue and possible solutions.

There are two main following reasons for employment while studying:
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some
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students
do not have the needed
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funds and
they want to develop practical
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skills
. As long as
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some
gifted
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people
could
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come
from poor families, they will try to earn money to pay for the education they desire to achieve.
For example
, in the history of humanity, there are
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some
celebrities who came from a poor background and achieved prosperity by working while achieving education as it was with
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Milla
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Jovovich
. Another reason
is related
to the necessity of special qualities for future occupation.
Therefore
, working as an assistant near experts can
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help
to develop the
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important
features in future employees.
For instance
,
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some
universities employ medical
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students
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
scientific projects which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
followers to apply theory in practice.

To solve this problem could
be proposed
two specific recommendations. The
first
solution is part-time employment that occupies a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
interval of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can fill their spare time by studying. The second solution is online types of works which definitely will save precious period of the learners
as well
as their cash.

In conclusion
, lack of capital and practical
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skills
pushes
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students
to work during studying.
However
, it is possible to minimize the
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negative
effects of this problem by giving them fractional load or remote kinds of jobs.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You are not happy about a service you received a couple of days ago from a company and you have decided to complain about it. Write a letter to the company to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your letter, express: why you we v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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