Universities have a vital effect on students' life. There are two approaches for the main aim of universities. One side thinks that it is important to give adequate information to them, whereas others believe students should learn about how to improve their talent for the workplace after graduating. I am an advocate of teaching students for their career.
In my opinion, the fundamental function of a university is showing youngs what they should do to find a good job in the future. Education systems need to consider this view as well because students need to survive in life. If a person does not work in a job, he/she may not rent or purchase a house. This is the main requirement for humankind. Thus, universities would provide adequate education to get a job.
The main function also includes another factor that teaches them how to benefit from their knowledge to help the public and employers. This is so important because students need to use theories or understand them for real life. As they are starting to work, they will try to connect them. For example, sociology and psychology are difficult major to study because they cover abstract subjects and students need to see these subject in life Thereby, authorities may give opportunities such as laboratories to carry out experiments.
In conclusion, Universities have a responsibility not only for education but also for life. If they had considered this main function, today, education would have been better. However, universities have a huge chance to change the future at the moment, I believe in the future students have the furthest education by way of this function that I mentioned.
Universities
have a vital effect on students'
life
. There are two approaches for the
main
aim of
universities
. One side
thinks
that it is
important
to give adequate information to them, whereas others believe
students
should learn about how to
improve
their talent for the workplace after graduating. I am an advocate of teaching
students
for their career.
In my opinion, the fundamental
function
of a
university
is showing
youngs
what they should do to find a
good
job in the future.
Education
systems
need
to consider this view
as well
because
students
need
to survive in
life
. If a person does not work in a job, he/she may not rent or
purchase
a
house
. This is the
main
requirement for humankind.
Thus
,
universities
would provide adequate
education
to
get
a job.
The
main
function
also
includes another factor that teaches them how to benefit from their knowledge to
help
the public and employers. This is
so
important
because
students
need
to
use
theories or understand them for real
life
. As they are starting to work, they will try to connect them.
For example
, sociology and psychology are difficult major to study
because
they cover abstract subjects and
students
need
to
see
these subject in
life
Thereby, authorities may give opportunities such as laboratories to carry out experiments.
In conclusion
,
Universities
have a responsibility not
only
for
education
but
also
for
life
. If they had considered this
main
function
,
today
,
education
would have been better.
However
,
universities
have a huge chance to
change
the future at the moment, I believe in the future
students
have the furthest
education
by way of this
function
that I mentioned.
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