Migrating from one country to another for various reasons is one of the newest trends among people across the globe these days. Many individuals move with their spouses and children to which some people argue that it leads to difficult situations for their offspring. On the contrary, others think that children gain a lot of advantages from this transition. This essay will juxtapose both these views, and finally conclude with my opinion.
As children get exposed to a new culture and society, sometimes it becomes hard for them to understand and cope with these changes. Consequently, they can easily get confused and sometimes feel lost and language change is one of the major reasons for it. For instance, there is a great enthusiasm among Indians to migrate to Canada, but as the native language followed by Indian schools is Hindi, it becomes difficult for minors to cope with Canadian accent English schools and teachers. Furthermore, they also face a plethora of hardships in adjusting to school culture and getting acquainted with them.
On the other hand, this can be seen as a refreshing change in a child's life as he gets to experience two different worlds in his life which can have a positive effect on him. Additionally, it gives a child opportunities to explore more which can help in broadening their thought process and widen their mind's perspective as they can compare and choose the best options for themselves and finally decide what they actually want.
In conclusion, the negatives of moving from one country to another in a child's life are few, I believe positives are more as children are gullible and can easily cope with such changes. 
Migrating from one country to another for various reasons is one of the newest trends among  
people
 across the globe these days.  
Many
 individuals  
move
 with their spouses and  
children
 to which  
some
  people
 argue that it leads to difficult situations for their offspring.  
On the contrary
, others  
think
 that  
children
 gain  
a lot of
 advantages from this transition. This essay will juxtapose both these views, and  
finally
 conclude with my opinion.
As  
children
  get
 exposed to a new culture and society,  
sometimes
 it becomes  
hard
 for them to understand and cope with these  
changes
.  
Consequently
, they can  
easily
  get
 confused and  
sometimes
 feel lost and language  
change
 is one of the major reasons for it.  
For instance
, there is a great enthusiasm among Indians to migrate to Canada,  
but
 as the native language followed by Indian schools is Hindi, it becomes difficult for minors to cope with Canadian accent English schools and teachers.  
Furthermore
, they  
also
 face a plethora of hardships in adjusting to school culture and getting acquainted with them. 
On the other hand
, this can be  
seen
 as a refreshing  
change
 in a child's life as he  
gets
 to experience two  
different
 worlds in his life which can have a  
positive
 effect on him.  
Additionally
, it gives a child opportunities to explore more which can  
help
 in broadening their  
thought
 process and widen their mind's perspective as they can compare and choose the best options for themselves and  
finally
 decide what they actually want. 
In conclusion
, the negatives of moving from one country to another in a child's life are few, I believe positives are more  
as
  children
 are gullible and can  
easily
 cope with such  
changes
. 
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