Migrating from one country to another for various reasons is one of the newest trends among people across the globe these days. Many individuals move with their spouses and children to which some people argue that it leads to difficult situations for their offspring. On the contrary, others think that children gain a lot of advantages from this transition. This essay will juxtapose both these views, and finally conclude with my opinion.
As children get exposed to a new culture and society, sometimes it becomes hard for them to understand and cope with these changes. Consequently, they can easily get confused and sometimes feel lost and language change is one of the major reasons for it. For instance, there is a great enthusiasm among Indians to migrate to Canada, but as the native language followed by Indian schools is Hindi, it becomes difficult for minors to cope with Canadian accent English schools and teachers. Furthermore, they also face a plethora of hardships in adjusting to school culture and getting acquainted with them.
On the other hand, this can be seen as a refreshing change in a child's life as he gets to experience two different worlds in his life which can have a positive effect on him. Additionally, it gives a child opportunities to explore more which can help in broadening their thought process and widen their mind's perspective as they can compare and choose the best options for themselves and finally decide what they actually want.
In conclusion, the negatives of moving from one country to another in a child's life are few, I believe positives are more as children are gullible and can easily cope with such changes.
Migrating from one country to another for various reasons is one of the newest trends among
people
across the globe these days.
Many
individuals
move
with their spouses and
children
to which
some
people
argue that it leads to difficult situations for their offspring.
On the contrary
, others
think
that
children
gain
a lot of
advantages from this transition. This essay will juxtapose both these views, and
finally
conclude with my opinion.
As
children
get
exposed to a new culture and society,
sometimes
it becomes
hard
for them to understand and cope with these
changes
.
Consequently
, they can
easily
get
confused and
sometimes
feel lost and language
change
is one of the major reasons for it.
For instance
, there is a great enthusiasm among Indians to migrate to Canada,
but
as the native language followed by Indian schools is Hindi, it becomes difficult for minors to cope with Canadian accent English schools and teachers.
Furthermore
, they
also
face a plethora of hardships in adjusting to school culture and getting acquainted with them.
On the other hand
, this can be
seen
as a refreshing
change
in a child's life as he
gets
to experience two
different
worlds in his life which can have a
positive
effect on him.
Additionally
, it gives a child opportunities to explore more which can
help
in broadening their
thought
process and widen their mind's perspective as they can compare and choose the best options for themselves and
finally
decide what they actually want.
In conclusion
, the negatives of moving from one country to another in a child's life are few, I believe positives are more
as
children
are gullible and can
easily
cope with such
changes
.
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