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Write about the following topic. The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. v.7

The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. with this statement? v. 7
There is no doubt that these days organizing a holiday are easier than before, however, the question: Is it better to arrange a holiday or just go for it without any previous arrangements? Is being a controversial issue nowadays because of the new technology which makes us feel we are living in a small village. In this essay I am going to discuss both viewpoints while I think planning is required to ensure having unlimited fun and relaxation. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that you need to plan the flight only then arrive to your destination and start looking for a hotel or a suitable place to stay in depending on your budget. Furthermore, it is also possible to say that walking randomly in any new place is fun in itself and you will be able to decide the best choice by looking at it and considering various variables like its location and distance from the major attractions and cleanness. This might be applicable in certain cases, for example, if someone is travelling alone or parents have kids above 12 years old so they can afford looking for places and they can eat whatever fir the available street food. On the other hand, it is also possible to consider with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact we have to plan our holidays ahead of time in order to avoid any inconvenience and this will give us more time to enjoy and do several activities instead of wasting time in the new destination looking for a good hotel or an internal flight. A second is that when travelling people are looking to use each single minute in discovering the new country. A particular one good example here is planned for a summer holiday which is usually for one month or less so there is no time to look for something and as a result all the required bookings should be done ahead and planned carefully. Also, some countries are not safe to walk during the night and imagine you have a flight arrives in the midnight, then it will be impossible to find a hotel or a place to sleep in. In conclusion, as we have seen there is no easy answer to this question, however, I guess people should plan their holidays carefully to avoid emergencies that might occur. In addition, this will give them a plenty of time to relax and enjoy.
There is no doubt that these days organizing a
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holiday
are easier than
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before
,
however
, the question: Is it better to arrange a
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holiday
or
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just
go for it without any previous arrangements? Is being a controversial issue nowadays
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because
of the
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new
technology which
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makes
us feel we are living in a
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small
village. In this essay I am going to discuss both viewpoints while I
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think
planning
is required
to ensure having unlimited fun and relaxation.

On one side of the argument, there are
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people
who argue that you need to plan the flight
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only
then arrive to your destination and
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start
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looking
for a hotel or a suitable
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place
to stay in depending on your budget.
Furthermore
, it is
also
possible to say that walking
randomly
in any
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new
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place
is fun in itself and you will be able to decide the best choice by
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looking
at it and considering various variables like its location and distance from the major attractions and cleanness. This might be applicable in certain cases,
for example
, if someone is travelling alone or parents have kids above 12 years
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old
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so
they can afford
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looking
for
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places and
they can eat whatever fir the available street food.

On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to consider with the opposing case. It is
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often
argued that in fact we
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have to
plan our
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holidays
ahead of
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time
in order to avoid any inconvenience and this will give us more
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time
to enjoy and do several activities
instead
of wasting
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time
in the
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new
destination
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looking
for a
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good
hotel or an internal flight.

A second is that when travelling
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people
are
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looking
to
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use
each single minute in discovering the
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new
country. A particular one
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good
example here
is planned
for a summer
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holiday
which is
usually
for one month or less
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so
there is no
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time
to look for something and
as a result
all the required bookings should
be done
ahead and planned
carefully
.
Also
,
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some
countries are not safe to walk during the night and imagine you have a flight arrives in the midnight, then it will be impossible to find a hotel or a
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place
to sleep in.

In conclusion
, as we have
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seen
there is no easy answer to this question,
however
, I guess
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people
should plan their
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holidays
carefully
to avoid emergencies that might occur.
In addition
, this will give them a
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plenty
of
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time
to relax and enjoy.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. with this statement? v. 7

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
413 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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