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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.2

The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. with this statement? v. 2
Along with the increase in income rate, there are more and more people travel to different places in the world. Some people suppose that scheduling in advanced is not necessary, instead of that, going without plans would be more adventurous. However, I believe that preparing to ahead bring much more advantages. Preparing a timetable for a holiday makes the trip more perfect. You can fill in planks of your itinerary that you know ahead some fantastic activities which could be unconsciously ignored if you do not schedule in advanced. You can complete the whole trip, participate in important events in sequence without doing anything stupid which only waste time. In addition, booking in advanced also reduces time for thinking about where to go or what to eat when you are in the middle of the layoff. Furthermore, booking hotels and tickets in advanced helps to avoid unavailability of the tickets during our trip. For some five star hotels, prior booking is required if you want to stay there or want to enjoy any adventurous events, for example, sky diving and bungee jumping. You can also get the best deal by booking in advanced. Many accommodations provide flexible price policy to provoke customers such as giving a discount of 20% if booking before 10 days or including free buffet breakfast. In addition, it becomes important to book tickets for sports and other events in advanced, so that we will be able to complete entire anniversary without any issues and most importantly finish it on time. In conclusion, I believe that holiday itinerary should be considered before starting to experience the best and completed vacation.
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places in the world.
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suppose that scheduling in
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is not necessary,
instead
of that, going without plans would be more adventurous.
However
, I believe that preparing to ahead bring much more advantages.

Preparing a timetable for a holiday
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makes
the trip more perfect. You can fill in planks of your itinerary that you know ahead
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some
fantastic activities which could be
unconsciously
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ignored
if you do not schedule in
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. You can complete the whole trip, participate in
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important
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events
in sequence without doing anything stupid which
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only
waste time.
In addition
, booking in
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also
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reduces
time for thinking about where to go or what to eat when you are in the middle of the layoff.

Furthermore
, booking hotels and tickets in
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helps
to avoid unavailability of the tickets during our trip. For
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hotels, prior booking
is required
if you want to stay there or want to enjoy any adventurous
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events
,
for example
,
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sky diving
and bungee jumping. You can
also
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get
the best deal by booking in
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advanced
.
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Many
accommodations provide flexible price policy to provoke customers such as giving a discount of 20% if booking
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before
10 days or including free buffet breakfast.
In addition
, it becomes
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important
to book tickets for sports and other
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events
in
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advanced
,
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so
that we will be able to complete entire anniversary without any issues and most
importantly
finish it on time.

In conclusion
, I believe that holiday itinerary should
be considered
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before
starting to experience the best and completed vacation.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. with this statement? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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