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Write about the following topic. It has been argued that giving gifts to friends and family should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. v.26

It has been argued that giving gifts to friends and family should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. with this? v. 26
There is no doubt that these days social events are being very important for us to gather and meet our families and friends. However, the question: Should we stop giving each other presents, as sometimes they are not used? Is being a controversial issue nowadays. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that these gifts are just a waste of money. One reason to say this is that people may not be in need of this kind of present or they have the same one already. Furthermore, it is also possible to say that some people cannot afford gifts because of financial problems or family commitments. In addition, some people invite others or even attend social events for instance: weddings and birthday parties only for courtesy so it should not be obligatory for them to bring gifts. One good illustration, here are celebrations in the Kuwaiti society. These parties are being priced and too many people are feeling that it is over their budgets to afford golden gifts or sometimes diamond pieces. On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. Gifts make people feel more related and close, however, they should not be expensive or luxury. Moreover, the best gift to give is money so the person can buy whatever he/she needs without any embarrassment even if it's a small amount like 5 Kuwaiti dinars. A particularly good example here are the stores where you can put a certain amount of money for someone and then he/she can come and get whatever is needed so no money is wasted and it can be used for useful things. This is done in Jordan, whenever you receive an invitation for a wedding or birthday parties, a certain store will be mentioned at the bottom, so you can put a certain amount of money in this store and they can refer to it to get their gift by themselves. In conclusion, There is no easy answer to this question, however, I tend to believe that gifts should be within a specific budget in the society and it has to be either in cash or within certain stores.
There is no doubt that these days social
events
are being
very
important
for us to gather and
meet
our families and friends.
However
, the question: Should we
stop
giving each other presents, as
sometimes
they are not
used
? Is being a controversial issue nowadays. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

On one side of the argument there are
people
who argue that these
gifts
are
just
a waste of
money
. One reason to say this is that
people
may not be in need of this kind of
present or
they have the same one already.
Furthermore
, it is
also
possible to say that
some
people
cannot afford
gifts
because
of financial problems or family commitments.
In addition
,
some
people
invite others or even attend social
events
for instance
: weddings and birthday parties
only
for courtesy
so
it should not be obligatory for them to bring
gifts
. One
good
illustration, here are celebrations in the Kuwaiti society. These parties are
being priced
and too
many
people
are feeling that it is over their budgets to afford golden
gifts
or
sometimes
diamond pieces.

On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to consider it with the opposing case.
Gifts
make
people
feel more related and close,
however
, they should not be expensive or luxury.
Moreover
, the best
gift
to give is
money
so
the person can
buy
whatever he/she needs without any embarrassment even if it's a
small
amount like 5 Kuwaiti dinars. A
particularly
good
example here are the
stores
where you can put a
certain
amount of
money
for
someone and
then he/she can
come
and
get
whatever
is needed
so
no
money
is wasted
and it can be
used
for useful things. This
is done
in Jordan, whenever you receive an invitation for a wedding or birthday parties, a
certain
store
will
be mentioned
at the bottom,
so
you can put a
certain
amount of
money
in this
store and
they can refer to it to
get
their
gift
by themselves.

In conclusion
, There is no easy answer to this question,
however
, I tend to believe that
gifts
should be within a specific budget in the society and it
has to
be either in cash or within
certain
stores
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay It has been argued that giving gifts to friends and family should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. with this? v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
378 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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