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Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following- 1. Where you plan to go? 2. What arrangements you already made. 3. What help you need from your friend with this topic. v.1

Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following- 1. Where you plan to go? 2. What arrangements you already made. 3. What help you need from your friend with this topic. v. 1
Dear Friend Reena, I hope you are doing great. It has been a while since we last met and hence I am planning to go on a picnic with you and Nitasha the upcoming weekend, which is the 23rd of February. Does it sound melodious? This letter is to discuss the preparations that have already put into action and the ones which are left. The location that we are thinking to go to this day out is the Botanical Garden, Hyderabad. This is a beautiful place in the north of the city and also a perfect venue to spend some wonderful time with your near and dear ones. This site is not very far from Kondapur and it will hardly take 15 minutes to reach from the regional bus stand or via a private taxi/vehicle. In addition to that, they have tremendously beautiful gardens and a sports zone, which is available for all ages. In terms of devising, I have already enquired with the garden office about the operational timings by calling them on the contact number provided by them on their website. Also, I have reserved a picnic spot for all of us. Food has been ordered and entrance tickets have been bought by Nitasha. She has also procured tickets for some of the activities offered in the garden. We will need your assistance with arranging an umbrella, disposable utensils, and cold drinks. It would be of great relief if you can also plan our to-and-fro journey from Kondapur. I have also entrusted Nitasha with the few other undertakings. Speak to you soon my dear friend. Big John
Dear Friend
Reena
,

I hope you are doing great. It has been a while since we last met and
hence
I am planning to go on a picnic with you and
Nitasha
the upcoming weekend, which is the 23rd of February. Does it sound melodious? This letter is to discuss the preparations that have already put into action and the
ones
which are
left
.

The location that we are thinking to go to this day out is the Botanical Garden, Hyderabad. This is a
beautiful
place in the north of the city and
also
a perfect venue to spend
some
wonderful time with your near and dear
ones
. This site is not
very
far from
Kondapur
and it will hardly take 15 minutes to reach from the regional bus stand or via a private taxi/vehicle.
In addition
to that, they have
tremendously
beautiful
gardens and a sports zone, which is available for all ages.

In terms of devising, I have already
enquired
with the garden office about the operational timings by calling them on the contact number provided by them on their website.
Also
, I have reserved a picnic spot for all of us. Food has
been ordered
and entrance tickets have been
bought
by
Nitasha
. She has
also
procured tickets for
some of the
activities offered in the garden.

We will need your assistance with arranging an umbrella, disposable utensils, and
cold
drinks. It would be of great relief if you can
also
plan our to-and-fro journey from
Kondapur
. I have
also
entrusted
Nitasha
with the few other undertakings.

Speak to you
soon
my dear friend.

Big
John
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following- 1. Where you plan to go? 2. What arrangements you already made. 3. What help you need from your friend with this topic. v. 1

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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