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Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him her to see a movie about your country In your letter say Describe the movie Why would he she find it interesting Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together v.1

Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him her to see a movie about your country In your letter say Describe the movie Why would he she find it interesting Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together v. 1
There is a view that the government can harness laws to force society recycling more of their waste. This essay will highlight the possibility of applying this strategy by considering both the benefit and drawbacks of this plan. To begin with the positives, the first crucial advantage of this strategy is the government will have a legal approach to punish people who try to break this law. As a result, it will unleash people’s awareness to recycle more if they want to avoid punishment. Furthermore, the compulsory activity to reuse their waste, slowly but surely, will break their old bad habit and make it this routine as a common one. Nevertheless, forcing a citizen to comply with these rules does presents some problem. For instance, even though most people already have the willingness to recycle their waste, this process needs particular innovativeness to reuse the waste to something else. This is because giving added value to waste is difficult. Beside a lack of ability to recycle, another possible problem from a government perspective is providing a system to monitor society’s compliance. If they can not find appropriate technologies to do this, they have to employ many numbers of police or public servant to ascertain people comply with the rules. To sum up, although creating needed laws for recycling can accelerate people's awareness and compliance, it will have some side effects to consider, especially in lack of knowledge to do it and the monitoring process. In my opinion, this law is not necessary. The government can shift their effort and resources to make a good campaign that can increase people's awareness.
There is a view that the
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government
can harness
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laws
to force society recycling more of their
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waste
. This essay will highlight the possibility of applying this strategy by considering both the benefit and drawbacks of this plan.

To
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begin
with the positives, the
first
crucial advantage of this strategy is the
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government
will have a legal approach to punish
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people
who try to break this
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law
.
As a result
, it will unleash
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people’s
awareness to recycle more if they want to avoid punishment.
Furthermore
, the compulsory activity to reuse their
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waste
,
slowly
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but
surely
, will break their
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old
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bad
habit and
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make
it this routine as a common one.

Nevertheless
, forcing a citizen to comply with these
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rules
does presents
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some
problem.
For instance
,
even though
most
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people
already have the willingness to recycle their
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waste
, this process needs particular innovativeness to reuse the
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waste
to something else. This is
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because
giving
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added
value to
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waste
is difficult. Beside a lack of ability to recycle, another possible problem from a
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government
perspective is providing a system to monitor society’s compliance. If they can not find appropriate technologies to do this, they
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have to
employ
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many
numbers of police or public servant to ascertain
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people
comply with the
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rules
.

To sum up, although creating needed
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laws
for recycling can accelerate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's awareness and compliance, it will have
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some
side effects to consider,
especially
in lack of knowledge to do it and the monitoring process. In my opinion, this
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law
is not necessary. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can shift their effort and resources to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
campaign that can increase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's awareness.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him her to see a movie about your country In your letter say Describe the movie Why would he she find it interesting Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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