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Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain what experience and special skills you have- tell him/her when you think you could startWrite at least 150 words. v.1

Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain what experience and special skills you have- tell him/her when you think you could start v. 1
It is a view that people by themselves are not capable of bringing about a positive change in the environment, rather it is the duty of governments and big organizations to do so. Although I disagree with the above statement, as I believe that every person can make a difference. Planet Earth is the only home for living organisms. The sustainable environment of a wider ecosystem co-existing together is vital to human life. Although, today due to global warming and climate change, our home is suffering. As a result, the entire nation is striving to control this disaster. The only way change will take place is when every individual begins to work on a personal level. For example: In schools, children are taught to separate wet and dry garbage, not to burst crackers due to air pollution. At colleges, youngsters perform skits in public places to raise awareness of the danger of losing the only place we can live in. On the contrary, even though industries have caused the most harm to the environment they make up for it through their corporate social responsibility activities. For example: A major company may decide to plant 1, 000 saplings in a land or stop the use of certain chemicals that flow into the river thereby killing marine life. The government too has many laws to preserve vegetation and wildlife. In conclusion, every person is as responsible as a large industry in destroying our wonderful place. In order to reconcile with ourselves, each must do his part.
It is a view that
people
by themselves are not capable of bringing about a
positive
change
in the environment,
rather
it is the duty of
governments
and
big
organizations to do
so
. Although I disagree with the above statement, as I believe that every person can
make
a difference.

Planet Earth is the
only
home for living organisms. The sustainable environment of a wider ecosystem co-existing together is vital to human life. Although,
today
due to global warming and climate
change
, our home is suffering.
As a result
, the entire nation is striving to control this disaster. The
only
way
change
will take
place
is when every individual
begins
to work on a personal level.
For example
: In schools, children
are taught
to separate wet and dry garbage, not to burst crackers due to air pollution. At colleges, youngsters perform skits in public
places
to raise awareness of the
danger
of losing the
only
place
we can
live
in.

On the contrary
,
even though
industries have caused the most harm to the environment they
make
up for it through their corporate social responsibility activities.
For example
: A major
company
may decide to plant 1, 000 saplings in a land or
stop
the
use
of certain chemicals that flow into the river thereby killing marine life. The
government
too has
many
laws to preserve vegetation and wildlife.

In conclusion
, every person is as responsible as a large industry in destroying our wonderful
place
. In order to reconcile with ourselves, each
must
do his part.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain what experience and special skills you have- tell him/her when you think you could start v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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