It is a view that people by themselves are not capable of bringing about a positive change in the environment, rather it is the duty of governments and big organizations to do so. Although I disagree with the above statement, as I believe that every person can make a difference.
Planet Earth is the only home for living organisms. The sustainable environment of a wider ecosystem co-existing together is vital to human life. Although, today due to global warming and climate change, our home is suffering. As a result, the entire nation is striving to control this disaster. The only way change will take place is when every individual begins to work on a personal level. For example: In schools, children are taught to separate wet and dry garbage, not to burst crackers due to air pollution. At colleges, youngsters perform skits in public places to raise awareness of the danger of losing the only place we can live in.
On the contrary, even though industries have caused the most harm to the environment they make up for it through their corporate social responsibility activities. For example: A major company may decide to plant 1, 000 saplings in a land or stop the use of certain chemicals that flow into the river thereby killing marine life. The government too has many laws to preserve vegetation and wildlife.
In conclusion, every person is as responsible as a large industry in destroying our wonderful place. In order to reconcile with ourselves, each must do his part. 
It is a view that  
people
 by themselves are not capable of bringing about a  
positive
  change
 in the environment,  
rather
 it is the duty of  
governments
 and  
big
 organizations to do  
so
. Although I disagree with the above statement, as I believe that every person can  
make
 a difference.
Planet Earth is the  
only
 home for living organisms. The sustainable environment of a wider ecosystem co-existing together is vital to human life. Although,  
today
 due to global warming and climate  
change
, our home is suffering.  
As a result
, the entire nation is striving to control this disaster. The  
only
 way  
change
 will take  
place
 is when every individual  
begins
 to work on a personal level.  
For example
: In schools, children  
are taught
 to separate wet and dry garbage, not to burst crackers due to air pollution. At colleges, youngsters perform skits in public  
places
 to raise awareness of the  
danger
 of losing the  
only
  place
 we can  
live
 in. 
On the contrary
,  
even though
 industries have caused the most harm to the environment they  
make
 up for it through their corporate social responsibility activities.  
For example
: A major  
company
 may decide to plant 1, 000 saplings in a land or  
stop
 the  
use
 of certain chemicals that flow into the river thereby killing marine life. The  
government
 too has  
many
 laws to preserve vegetation and wildlife. 
In conclusion
, every person is as responsible as a large industry in destroying our wonderful  
place
. In order to reconcile with ourselves, each  
must
 do his part. 
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes