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Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to dogive details of when you would be available for this workYou should write at least 150 words v.1

Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to dogive details of when you would be available for this workv. 1
Undoubtedly, recently, the phenomenon of studying real books and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I fully agree with this fact that although storybooks are extremely valuable for individuals, people have to spend their time to read the real ones. In turn, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this fact. On the one hand, reading real books such as genuine stories and scientific facts can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of historical intelligence, recognition of the facts as well as success in living, are inextricably bound up. That is to say that humans need to know the facts to use them in their life, thus they are not able to live intelligently without recognition of facts, which are being destroyed, extremely. For instance, understanding the reasons behind starting the First World Wide affected European countries to decide to be converted to a powerful unit named the European Union. On the other hand, understanding the facts might decrease the consequences of unwanted events. Some people declare that experience is the most valuable asset of people, which is free of charge. Hence, realities must be taken into account in all stages of people’s life. To summarize, some people are of the opinion that fictions must be honoured similar to the facts, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that understanding the different facts such as novels, published facts and real happenings are much more valuable than fake ones.
Undoubtedly
, recently, the phenomenon of studying
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real
books and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I
fully
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agree
with this
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fact
that although storybooks are
extremely
valuable for individuals,
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people
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have to
spend their time to read the
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real
ones. In turn, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this fact.

On the one hand, reading
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real
books such as genuine stories and scientific facts can provide the society with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
noticeable effects which
are rooted
in the
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fact
that the merits of historical intelligence, recognition of the facts
as well
as success in living, are
inextricably
bound up.
That is
to say that humans need to know the facts to
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use
them in their life,
thus
they are not able to
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live
intelligently
without recognition of facts, which are being
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destroyed
,
extremely
.
For instance
, understanding the reasons behind starting the
First
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World Wide
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affected
European countries to decide to
be converted
to a powerful unit named the European Union.

On the other hand
, understanding the facts might decrease the consequences of unwanted
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events
.
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Some
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people
declare that experience is the most valuable asset of
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people
, which is free of charge.
Hence
, realities
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must
be taken
into account in all stages of
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people’s
life.

To summarize
,
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some
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people
are of the opinion that fictions
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must
be
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honoured
similar to the facts, while others
are opposed
to this view. I am sure that understanding the
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different
facts such as novels, published facts and
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real
happenings are much more valuable than fake ones.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital say what type of unpaid work you would be able to dogive details of when you would be available for this workv. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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