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Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: •include some information about the film•explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film•inform other arran v.1

Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: •include some information about the film•explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film•inform other arran v. 1
In the recent era, pollution and accommodation of the over population are at alarming stage and as a result health problems evolved day by day. In my opinion, I completely agree with the topic. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will illustrate my opinion with suitable example. In this section, I will highlight pollution related problems and necessary action has to be taken by union organization. Nowadays, everyone can see a drastic increase in air as well as water contamination. For control of these situations, ministry can make rules and regulation. For example, The Indian authority has implemented industrial act for the drainage of toxic chemical and air. These have to be followed by each company. In addition, air adultration is also produced by usage of more vehicles. For these, authority has to arrange more easy public transport. So that one can use it and reduce the usage of personal vehicle. For example, in Europe, most of individual use trains maintained by government. Furthermore, the accommodation is major problems nowadays faced by individuals. Overpopulation is one of the major problems across the globe. Ministry organization can arrange awareness seminars on family planning and make some policies. For instance, authority in china implemented rules and regulation over family planning to overcome overpopulation problem and such kind of action can help government to solve housing problems of the public. Furthermore, union authority of every country should generate some revenue for the individual and provide some scheme to buy homes. For instance, Indian government made AVAS Yojna for the accommodation of middle class families. In summary, political unit of the every country should make and implement some strict laws and regulation to overcome pollution as well as housing related problems.
In the recent era, pollution and accommodation of the over population are at alarming stage and
as a result
health
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problems
evolved day by day. In my opinion, I completely
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agree
with the topic.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
the upcoming paragraphs, I will illustrate my opinion with suitable example.

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In
this section, I will highlight pollution related
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problems
and necessary action
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has to
be taken
by union organization. Nowadays, everyone can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a drastic increase in air
as well
as water contamination. For control of these situations, ministry can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulation.
For example
, The Indian
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authority
has implemented industrial act for the drainage of toxic chemical and air. These
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be followed
by each
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
In addition
, air
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adultration
is
also
produced by usage of more vehicles. For these,
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authority
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has to
arrange more easy public transport.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the usage of personal vehicle.
For example
, in Europe,
Consider using "most individual" or "most of the individual".
most of individual
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use
trains maintained by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.

Furthermore
, the accommodation is major
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problems
nowadays faced by individuals. Overpopulation is one of the major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
across the globe. Ministry organization can arrange awareness seminars on family planning and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
policies.
For instance
,
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authority
in
Capitalize this word if you mean the country, not white porcelain.
china
implemented
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rules
and regulation over family planning to overcome overpopulation
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problem
and such kind of action can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
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government
to solve housing
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problems
of the public.
Furthermore
, union
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authority
of every country should generate
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some
revenue for the individual and provide
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some
scheme to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
homes.
For instance
, Indian
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
made
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AVAS
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Yojna
for the accommodation of middle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
families.

In summary, political unit of the every country should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
and implement
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
strict laws and regulation to overcome pollution
as well
as housing related
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: •include some information about the film•explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film•inform other arran v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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