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You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v.1

You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v. 1
Examination is the crucial for every student. There are many styles for studying. Some people prefer so study during exam days, however, some always learn a little every day. Both choices have benefits and drawbacks, but I believe that a regular habit of study is the best way to get a high score. Many people decide to learn and read books during night periods before a few days of the test. They believe that reading academic books before the exam is helping them do not miss any essential points. Nevertheless, it is hard to complete reading every key point unless you follow the entire syllabus. In addition, if you learn overnight, you will sleep in the exam room because your body need more rest and it is easy to get sick. On the other hand, some people believe that the best studying patterns should study every time. If you are reading little books per day, it will decrease your time when upcoming test. At that period, you will have more time to focus again. For example, when you do not understand some issues, you can ask teachers or your friends to explain to you twice. For me, I prefer this method because it more efficient. For example, you can balance your life and your study during the test period and you will get a healthy which lead to better memory. Whereas, it is easy for you to forget everything that you read for a long time. In conclusion, each student has their own study patterns, but in my view studying every day is the best action to improve your score.
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a high score.

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people
decide to learn and read books during night periods
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the exam is helping them do not miss any essential points.
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to complete reading every key point unless you follow the entire syllabus.
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your body need more rest and it is easy to
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On the other hand
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believe that the best studying patterns should
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every time. If you are reading
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books per day, it will decrease your time when upcoming
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. At that period, you will have more time to focus again.
For example
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issues, you can ask teachers or your friends to
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to you twice. For me, I prefer this method
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more efficient.
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example, you can balance your life and your
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during the
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test
period and you will
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a healthy which lead to better memory. Whereas, it is easy for you to forget everything that you read for a long time.

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, each student has their
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patterns,
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in my view studying every day is the best action to
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IELTS essay You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter Explain why you have gone to live in the new city Describe the place where you are living Invite your friend to come and see you v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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