YOUNG GENERATION ARE TAUGHT TO BE THE NEXT LEADERS IN THE FUTURE. SPENDING THEIR SPARE HOURS IN THE MALL ARE TAUGHT BY SOME TO BE BENEFICIAL TO THEM, HOWEVER, OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVES THAT HAVE HAD DETRIMENTAL EFFECT TO THEM AND TO THE COMMNUNITY AS WELL. THE WRITER IS STRONGLY AGREES FOR THE LATTER VIEW AND THE REASONS WILL EXPLAIN BELOW FALLOWED BY A CONCLUSION.
TO BEGIN WITH, YOUNG ONES ARE EXPECTED TO STUDY HARD DURING SCHOOL HOURS TO CREATE A SUSTANABLE LIFE FOR THEIR FUTURE. IN ORDER TO ATTAIN THIS SUCH KIND OF LIFE, THEY SHOULD EXERT VIGOROUS EFFORT. THEY ARE EXPECTED TO SPEND MOST OF THEIR DAYS IN SCHOOL DOING SCHOOL ACTIVITIES AND ACADEMIC CLASSES WHICH IS ESSENTIAL FOR THEM. UTILIZING THEIR FREE TIME IN STUDYING THEIR LESSONS AT HOME ARE ADVISABLE. ALTHOUGH, GOING TO THE MALLS SOMETIME FOR PURCHASING SOME ITEMS, EATING IN THE MALL TOGETHER WITH THEIR LOVE ONES IS CONSIDERED AND CRUCIAL.
HOWEVER, INVESTING SPARE HOURS IN THE SHOPPING MALLS, AND INDULGING IN THE ACTIVITIES THAT ARE TAUGHT TO HAVE NEGATIVE IMPACT ON THEIR STUDIES, SUCH AS ONLINE GAMES THAT ARE INCREDIBLYPOPULAR NOWADAYS ARE ABSOLUTELY NOT BENEFICIAL AND HAVE HAD A HUGE DRAWBACK. PLENTY OF YOUNG ONES IN THIS MODERN DAYS LOST THEIR CONCENTRATION ON THIEIR STUDIES AND SPEND MOST OF THE TIME PLAYING ONLINE GAMES IN THE MALLS PARTICULARLY MALE STUDENTS. FURTHERMORE, MALLS HAVE HUGE OF OPPORTUNITIES TO OFFER AND CAN CAUSE TEMPTATIONS SUCH AS PURCHASING THINGS, WHICH IS NOT NECESSARY AND CONSIDERED TO BE WASTE OF MONEY.
TO CONCLUDE, ALTHOUGH IT IS NOT FORBIDDEN TO SPEND EXTRA HOURS IN THE MALL, HOWEVER I BELIEVE THAT YOUNG GENERATION SHOULD SPEND LESS AND SPEND MORE TIME IN THE STUDIES.
YOUNG
GENERATION
ARE TAUGHT
TO BE THE
NEXT
LEADERS IN THE FUTURE. SPENDING THEIR SPARE
HOURS
IN THE
MALL
ARE TAUGHT
BY
SOME
TO BE BENEFICIAL TO THEM,
HOWEVER
, OTHER
PEOPLE
BELIEVES
THAT HAVE HAD DETRIMENTAL EFFECT TO THEM AND TO THE
COMMNUNITY
AS WELL
. THE WRITER IS
STRONGLY
AGREES
FOR THE LATTER VIEW AND THE REASONS WILL
EXPLAIN
BELOW FALLOWED BY A CONCLUSION.
TO
BEGIN
WITH,
YOUNG
ONES
ARE
EXPECTED
TO
STUDY
HARD
DURING SCHOOL
HOURS
TO CREATE A
SUSTANABLE
LIFE FOR THEIR FUTURE. IN ORDER TO ATTAIN THIS SUCH KIND OF LIFE, THEY SHOULD EXERT VIGOROUS EFFORT. THEY ARE
EXPECTED
TO
SPEND
MOST OF THEIR DAYS IN SCHOOL DOING SCHOOL ACTIVITIES AND ACADEMIC CLASSES WHICH IS ESSENTIAL FOR THEM. UTILIZING THEIR FREE TIME IN STUDYING THEIR LESSONS AT HOME ARE ADVISABLE. ALTHOUGH, GOING TO THE
MALLS
SOMETIME FOR PURCHASING
SOME
ITEMS, EATING IN THE
MALL
TOGETHER WITH THEIR
LOVE
ONES
IS CONSIDERED
AND CRUCIAL.
HOWEVER
, INVESTING SPARE
HOURS
IN THE SHOPPING
MALLS
, AND INDULGING IN THE ACTIVITIES THAT
ARE TAUGHT
TO HAVE
NEGATIVE
IMPACT ON THEIR
STUDIES
, SUCH AS ONLINE GAMES THAT ARE
INCREDIBLYPOPULAR
NOWADAYS ARE
ABSOLUTELY
NOT BENEFICIAL AND HAVE HAD A HUGE DRAWBACK.
PLENTY
OF
YOUNG
ONES
IN THIS MODERN DAYS LOST THEIR CONCENTRATION ON
THIEIR
STUDIES
AND
SPEND
MOST OF THE TIME PLAYING ONLINE GAMES IN THE
MALLS
PARTICULARLY
MALE STUDENTS.
FURTHERMORE
,
MALLS
HAVE HUGE OF OPPORTUNITIES TO OFFER AND CAN CAUSE TEMPTATIONS SUCH AS PURCHASING THINGS, WHICH IS NOT NECESSARY AND CONSIDERED TO BE WASTE OF MONEY.
TO CONCLUDE
, ALTHOUGH IT IS NOT FORBIDDEN TO
SPEND
EXTRA
HOURS
IN THE
MALL
,
HOWEVER
I BELIEVE THAT
YOUNG
GENERATION SHOULD
SPEND
LESS AND
SPEND
MORE TIME IN THE
STUDIES
.
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