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Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week. 1) Describe where he will stay. 2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. v.1

Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week. 1) Describe where he will stay. 2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. v. 1
Despite the fact that the most suitable way of transportation in urban areas is a car according to some people, it is thought by others that a bicycle is a better option. In my opinion, even though cars are a relaxing and time-saving mode of city transport, cycling is the best choice due to being environmentally friendly and creating a regular physical activity. On the one hand, some people consider a car as the best alternative to travel in cities because car travel is time effective and comfortable. For instance, not only does it offer great comfort in terms of seating and air conditioning, but it also enables drivers to arrive at their destinations in a short period of time, leading to be advisable for the elderly, disabled, and those that need to conserve time and energy for their work. Another reason why automobile travel is the optimal is that automobiles can be used to carry a number of passengers and bulky items at the same time which is therefore widely favorable for a big family trip. Furthermore, it is often said that since cars have a frame and safety mechanism that can protect drivers from any accidents, it is usually safe to roam by cars in towns. On the other hand, it is commonly believed by some people that cycling is the best mean of transportation to be used in cities because of two main reasons. Firstly, bicycle travel is eco-friendly as there are no exhaust fumes to pollute the atmosphere and no required fuel which can deplete the word resources. In addition, there has been noticed that the large majority of urban professionals suffer from a sedentary lifestyle, causing several chronic conditions such as cancer, diabetes, obesity or heart disease. This is resulted from a lack of time in daily routines of a workout. By using a cycle to commute, however, urban commuters are able to incorporate it as a part of a daily exercise without any inconvenience. In conclusion, people may vary in their opinions about whether a car or a bicycle is the better form of city vehicles, whereas personally I strongly support a bicycle as the best method for urban transport since it helps in keeping people healthy and maintaining the sustainability of the environment.
Despite the fact that the most suitable way of transportation in
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urban
areas is a
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car
according to
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some
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people
, it is
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thought
by others that a
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bicycle
is a better option. In my opinion,
even though
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cars
are a relaxing and time-saving mode of city transport, cycling is the
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best
choice due to being
environmentally
friendly and creating a regular physical activity.

On the one hand,
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some
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people
consider a
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car
as the
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best
alternative to
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travel
in
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cities
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because
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car
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travel
is
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time
effective and comfortable.
For instance
, not
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only
does it offer great comfort in terms of seating and air conditioning,
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but
it
also
enables drivers to arrive at their destinations in a short period of
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time
, leading to be advisable for the elderly, disabled, and those that need to conserve
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time
and energy for their work. Another reason why automobile
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travel
is the optimal is that automobiles can be
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used
to carry a number of passengers and bulky items at the same
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time
which is
therefore
widely
favorable for a
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big
family trip.
Furthermore
, it is
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often
said that since
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cars
have a frame and safety mechanism that can protect drivers from any accidents, it is
usually
safe to roam by
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cars
in towns.

On the other hand
, it is
commonly
believed by
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some
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people
that cycling is the
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best
mean of transportation to be
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used
in
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cities
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because
of two main reasons.
Firstly
,
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bicycle
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travel
is eco-friendly as there are no exhaust fumes to pollute the atmosphere and no required fuel which can deplete the word resources.
In addition
, there has
been noticed
that the large majority of
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urban
professionals suffer from a sedentary lifestyle, causing several chronic conditions such as cancer, diabetes, obesity or heart disease. This
is resulted
from a lack of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in daily routines of a workout. By using a cycle to commute,
however
,
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urban
commuters are able to incorporate it as a part of a daily exercise without any inconvenience.

In conclusion
,
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people
may vary in their opinions about whether a
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car
or a
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bicycle
is the better form of city vehicles, whereas
personally
I
strongly
support a
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bicycle
as the
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best
method for
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urban
transport since it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in keeping
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people
healthy and maintaining the sustainability of the environment.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week. 1) Describe where he will stay. 2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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