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288 (2) Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfectyou should say: where you were on this daywhat the weather was like on this daywhat you did during the dayand explain why you thought the weather was perfect that day? v.1

288 (2) Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfectyou should say: where you were on this daywhat the weather was like on this daywhat you did during the dayand explain why you thought the weather was perfect that day? v. 1
Recycling of material is a useful process. Apparently, it is also good for the environment, because it reduces the waste material into the reusable product. So according to me, people should learn about their use and not to throw away these bottles. Lets discuss in the essay. First and foremost, now a day, packaging of a number of drinks is available in the glass bottles, because the material present in the glass does not react and helps in increasing the shelf life of the product. For example, milk, juices, pills and syrups all the things are mostly sold in the glass packaging and people usually throw it trash and do not think to reuse it. Because, sometimes, they do not know about their uses and may be people feel that, it will increase the trash at home. So, they throw it. But, accordingly, people have to help it again instead of trashing it. There are so many uses of glass bottles, further discuss in the next paragraph. Secondly, if we talk about the reusable glass bottles. Undoubtedly, there are tons of handling of used glass cans. For example, children at home can do the art and crafts and by decorating that as a flower pot and mini aquarium. Moreover, mirror bottles can handle in a kitchen and flower garden for the purpose of planting and sowing seeds. As well as, glass bottles can be used for the storage purposes like we can store cereals, grains and spices in it for a long time. To conclude, recycling of material is equally important as the cleaning of the house on a daily basis. However, recycling will helps us to decrease the amount of trash.
Recycling of
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is a useful process.
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good
for the environment,
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because
it
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reduces
the waste
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material
into the reusable product.
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So
according to me,
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people
should learn about their
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use
and not to throw away these
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bottles
.
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Lets
discuss in the essay.

First
and foremost,
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now
a day, packaging of a number of drinks is available in the
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glass
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bottles
,
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because
the
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material
present in the
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glass
does not react and
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helps
in increasing the shelf life of the product.
For example
, milk, juices, pills and syrups all the things are
mostly
sold in the
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glass
packaging and
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people
usually
throw it trash and do not
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think
to reuse it.
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,
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sometimes
, they do not know about their
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uses
and may be
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people
feel that, it will increase the trash at home.
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So
, they throw it.
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,
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,
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people
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help
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instead
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so
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many
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uses
of
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glass
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bottles
,
further
discuss in the
next
paragraph.

Secondly
, if we talk about the reusable
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glass
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bottles
.
Undoubtedly
, there are tons of handling of
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used
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glass
cans.
For example
, children at home can do the art and crafts and by decorating that as a flower pot and mini aquarium.
Moreover
, mirror
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bottles
can handle in a kitchen and flower garden for the purpose of planting and sowing seeds.
As well
as,
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glass
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bottles
can be
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used
for the storage purposes like we can store cereals, grains and spices in it for a long time.

To conclude
, recycling of
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material
is
equally
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important
as the cleaning of the
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house
on a daily basis.
However
, recycling will
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helps
us to decrease the amount of trash.
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IELTS essay 288 (2) Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfectyou should say: where you were on this daywhat the weather was like on this daywhat you did during the dayand explain why you thought the weather was perfect that day? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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