Dear Kevin,
I hope you are fine and this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to want your assistance to collect money for a charity event that going to take place in my college next month. As you know that I am one of the members of the " Help-a-child" charity organization in my territory. As an active member, the group is planning to hold a program the next program.
The charity group is would want to give their service and offer it to the street children of Voronezh City. We are a non-government organization which obtains our funds vitally from business and individual donations. Hence, if we have not found enough our resources, we ask other organizations and people who could help us make this program possible.
As my good friend, I am asking for your assistance in raising money to suffice the budget out charity is aiming to collect. I know you have been the president of the musicians club in your school. Perhaps, I may suggest if it will be possible to hold a mini-concert in the weekend, This would require a lot of your time but I believe this totally would be successful.
Please Call me as soon as you received this letter so that we can talk about more of the plans and if you have a bright idea for us to work on.
Thank you in advance for your help.
All the Best.
Gokhan.
Dear Kevin,
I hope you are fine and this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to want your assistance to collect money for a
charity
event
that going to take place in my college
next
month. As you know that I am one of the members of the
"
;
Help-a-child"
;
charity
organization in my territory. As an active member, the group is planning to hold a program the
next
program.
The
charity
group is would want to give their service and offer it to the street children of Voronezh City. We are a non-
government
organization which obtains our funds
vitally
from business and individual donations.
Hence
, if we have not found
enough
our resources, we ask other organizations and
people
who could
help
us
make
this program possible.
As my
good
friend, I am asking for your assistance in raising money to suffice the budget out
charity
is aiming to collect. I know you have been the president of the musicians club in your school. Perhaps, I may suggest if it will be possible to hold a mini-concert in the weekend, This would require
a lot of
your time
but
I believe this
totally
would be successful.
Please Call
me as
soon
as you received this letter
so
that we can talk about more of the plans and if you have a bright
idea
for us to work on.
Thank you in advance for your
help
.
All the Best.
Gokhan
.
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