It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful Architects should not worry about producing as a work of art Do you agree or disagree v.2
It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful Architects should not worry about producing as a work of art v. 2
It is undoubtedly true that architecture and art are always connected with each other since beginning of the World. People see ancient and modern buildings as a significant art values but this essay totally believe that function of a structure should be taken into the consideration as a first priority.
In my opinion, first thing that should be thought when building a something is whether useful or not. Instead of satisfying people outside, architects must focus on more about needs of citizens. With increasing of World population, for instance, both governments and firm are seeking more space for work, life and even entertainment. Therefore, it is indeed important to make full and effective building to create more space which is not allowed by art architecture.
On the other hand, another factor is safety. This is important issue in this kind of areas that striked by natural disasters. For example, in China was attacked by huge earthquake in 2008, shown us a good example of importance of building structure and designs. Most of them were seriously destroyed while some residental areas remained with untouched thank to their effective structures. Just imagine that if those art buildings had been used for living, how many people would have died.
In conclusion, from my perspective, architects should give more attention to the needs of its users and provide safety before think appearance and others.
It is
undoubtedly
true that architecture and
art
are always connected with each other since beginning of the World.
People
see
ancient and modern
buildings
as a significant
art
values
but
this essay
totally
believe that function of a structure should
be taken
into the consideration as a
first
priority.
In my opinion,
first
thing that should be
thought
when
building
a something is whether useful or not.
Instead
of satisfying
people
outside, architects
must
focus on more about needs of citizens. With increasing of World population,
for instance
, both
governments
and firm are seeking more space for work, life and even entertainment.
Therefore
, it is
indeed
important
to
make
full and effective
building
to create more space which is not
allowed
by
art
architecture.
On the other hand
, another factor is safety. This is
important
issue in this kind of areas that
striked
by natural disasters.
For example
, in China
was attacked
by huge earthquake in 2008, shown us a
good
example of importance of
building
structure and designs. Most of them were
seriously
destroyed
while
some
residental
areas remained with untouched thank to their effective structures.
Just
imagine that if those
art
buildings
had been
used
for living, how
many
people
would have
died
.
In conclusion
, from my perspective, architects should give more attention to the needs of its users and provide safety
before
think
appearance
and others
.
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