There are many arguments about people's lifestyle. While many people believe that having a peaceful life and longevity may be a good choice, I would argue that quality of life counts.
There are several reasons why life span and tranquility are preferable to many people. The primary reason is human curiosity about the future. People always want to know what will happen in the next 20 or 30 years. If people have children, they will want to live longer to see the personal development of your own kids. Additionally, the human's ability is different from one another, so not all people can tolerate the difficulties. It is justifiable to make sense of why many people want to live in this way.
However, I would argue that leading a short but glorious life is much more meaningful. All humans just live once, so it is worth risking all they have. Individuals cannot gain any significant accomplishments if they do not experience harsh time or dangerous situations. Take myself for example; when I was broke, I learnt many more useful lessons than I had had before. Moreover, human expectancy does not matter if nothing happens. For example, John Lennon died at the age of 40, but his life was full of glory. His life is certainly much more significant than that life of people who live until 100 but have no spotlights.
In conclusion, although a long, tranquil life is a dream of many people, I priotisize a shorter lifetime that is full of adventures.
There are
many
arguments about
people
's lifestyle. While
many
people
believe that having a peaceful
life
and longevity may be a
good
choice, I would argue that quality of
life
counts.
There are several reasons why
life
span and tranquility are preferable to
many
people
. The primary reason is human curiosity about the future.
People
always want to know what will happen in the
next
20 or 30 years. If
people
have children, they will want to
live
longer to
see
the personal development of your
own
kids.
Additionally
, the human's ability is
different
from one another,
so
not all
people
can tolerate the difficulties. It is justifiable to
make
sense of why
many
people
want to
live
in this way.
However
, I would argue that leading a short
but
glorious
life
is much more meaningful. All humans
just
live
once,
so
it is worth risking all they have. Individuals cannot gain any significant accomplishments if they do not experience harsh time or
dangerous
situations. Take myself
for example
; when I was broke, I
learnt
many
more useful lessons than I had had
before
.
Moreover
, human expectancy does not matter if nothing happens.
For example
, John Lennon
died
at the age of 40,
but
his
life
was full of glory. His
life
is
certainly
much more significant than that
life
of
people
who
live
until 100
but
have no spotlights.
In conclusion
, although a long, tranquil
life
is a dream of
many
people
, I
priotisize
a shorter lifetime
that is
full of adventures.
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