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Workers are more stisfied when they have alot of different tasks to do compared to workers have similar tasks. v.1

Workers are more stisfied when they have alot of different tasks to do compared to workers have similar tasks. v. 1
The way how people interact has changed recently. Nowadays, certain technologies can be useful for creating and maintaining relationships. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and disadvantages of the relationships that are started and developed through technology services. Generally speaking, there are a variety of reasons why people use technology services to create and develop relationships. Firstly, these services such as smartphones, computers enable us to meet with others that is fast and easy. For instance, any individual can use online dating services to meet people who are just a swipe away. Secondly, social media makes it extremely easy to get to know a person from overseas. In other words, people from different cultures can meet without worrying about the distance. Lastly, those who live apart from each other can have a chance to sustain their relationships by using the smartphone and laptop applications. On the other hand, the trend of people beginning and sustaining their relationship through the services that offered via technology devices have a number of negative implications. The first reason is that these devices provide us with an environment that may not be always safe. In other words, the term of cat-fishing is used to describe an individual who uses pictures that do not belong to them. Another good is that people who use these services may have a temporary relationship which may come and go. In conclusion, beginning and sustaining relationships using these technologies may be a good idea, but one ought to consider the negative effects that come with them.
The way how
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people
interact has
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changed
recently. Nowadays, certain
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technologies
can be useful for creating and maintaining
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relationships
. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and disadvantages of the
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relationships
that are
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started
and developed through
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technology
services.

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speaking, there are a variety of reasons why
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people
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use
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technology
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services
to create and develop
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relationships
.
Firstly
, these
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services
such as smartphones, computers enable us to
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meet
with others
that is
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fast
and easy.
For instance
, any individual can
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use
online dating
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services
to
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meet
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people
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who
are
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just
a swipe away.
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, social media
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makes
it
extremely
easy to
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get
to know a person from overseas. In
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other
words,
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people
from
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different
cultures can
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meet
without worrying about the distance.
Lastly
, those
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who
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live
apart from each
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other
can have a chance to sustain their
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relationships
by using the smartphone and laptop applications.

On the
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other
hand, the trend of
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people
beginning and sustaining their
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relationship
through the
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services
that offered via
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technology
devices have a number of
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negative
implications. The
first
reason is that these devices provide us with an environment that may not be always safe. In
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other
words, the term of cat-fishing is
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used
to
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describe
an individual
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who
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uses
pictures that do not belong to them. Another
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good
is that
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people
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who
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use
these
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services
may have a temporary
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relationship
which may
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come
and go.

In conclusion
, beginning and sustaining
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relationships
using these
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technologies
may be a
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good
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idea
,
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one ought to consider the
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negative
effects that
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come
with them.
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IELTS essay Workers are more stisfied when they have alot of different tasks to do compared to workers have similar tasks. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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