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Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than they do similiar taskes all day long. Uses specific reasons and examples to illustrate your ideas. v.1

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than they do similiar taskes all day long. Uses specific reasons and examples to illustrate your ideas. v. 1
There is no doubt that people have different personalties and different prefrances. While some people prefer to do similer wark tasks everyday, others consider it very boring and discouraging. In my point of view, people should do what ever they want at work in order to feel more satisfied. The basis of my views is as the follow. In their endeavor to their success, people sometimes neglect the true meaning fo work. They starts to obey their manger instracture and their boss rules. As a result, they started to work under immense pressure and make mistakes. For example, workers who prefer to work on same task everyday are less likely to loose their focus if they have given different tasks through out the day. Instead they tend to do their utmost if they are asked to work on the same work tasks everyday. Geving workers the option to focus on one task or deal with different tasks over the day, will definlately have a great effect on workers preformance. On the other hand, there is no denying that preforming different tasks through warkday is more entertaining. Since working for the same work tasks evey single day sound boring to some workers. People like chance and the only way to achieve that is through implementing different tasks per day. For example, pharmacy workers can work on drug preperation inside the pharmacy and delivering medication to homes at the same time. Working outside the pharmacy have some advantages like enjoing weather and the sun, While they do not enjoy this privilage inside the pharmacy. Giving them the option to deliver medication outside the pharmacy will refresh their mind and help them to endure their work load and tasks. As a conclusion, we should not let work load and work stress to divert us from way that we like to do our daily work. To achieve their ultmaite goles people should not save any efforts to enjoy their work. Being passionate to work is the cornor stone for people future success.
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people
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different
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personalties
and
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different
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prefrances
. While
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some
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people
prefer to do
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similer
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wark
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tasks
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everyday
, others consider it
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very
boring and discouraging. In my point of view,
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people
should do what ever they want at
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work
in order to feel more satisfied. The basis of my views is as the follow.

In their endeavor to their success,
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people
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sometimes
neglect the true meaning
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fo
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work
. They
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starts
to obey their manger
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instracture
and their boss
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rules
.
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, they
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started
to
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work
under immense pressure and
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make
mistakes.
For example
,
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workers
who prefer to
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work
on same
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task
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everyday
are less likely to
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loose
their focus if they have
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given
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different
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tasks
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through out
the day.
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Instead
they tend to do their utmost if they
are asked
to
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work
on the same
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work
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tasks
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everyday
.
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Geving
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workers
the option to focus on one
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task
or deal with
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different
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tasks
over the day, will
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definlately
have a great effect on
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workers
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preformance
.

On the other hand
, there is no denying that preforming
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different
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tasks
through
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warkday
is more entertaining. Since working for the same
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work
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tasks
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evey
single day sound boring to
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some
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workers
.
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People
like chance and the
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only
way to achieve
that is
through implementing
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different
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tasks
per day.
For example
,
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pharmacy
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workers
can
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work
on drug
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preperation
inside the
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pharmacy
and delivering medication to homes at the same time. Working outside the
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pharmacy
have
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some
advantages like
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enjoing
weather and the sun, While they do not enjoy this
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privilage
inside the
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pharmacy
. Giving them the option to deliver medication outside the
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pharmacy
will refresh their mind and
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help
them to endure their
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work
load and tasks.

As a conclusion, we should not
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let
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work
load and
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work
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stress
to divert us from way that we like to do our daily
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work
. To achieve their
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ultmaite
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goles
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people
should not save any efforts to enjoy their
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work
. Being passionate to
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work
is the
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cornor
stone for
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people
future success.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Mistakes

IELTS essay Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than they do similiar taskes all day long. Uses specific reasons and examples to illustrate your ideas. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
338 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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