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TPO 42Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

TPO 42Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
The exercise, I learned, was that we should all stay consistent with ourselves consistent. Obviously, I definitely realized that coming clean to others was significant, yet I was curious about with being consistent with myself until I arrived at fifth grade. Truth be told, I found out about this significant exercise in a fairly hard manner when I neglected to complete my own science task on schedule Anyway, the scientific venture, I picked, was a fairly troublesome one. Notwithstanding, before allocating the activity, my science educator had over and over inquired as to whether I had the option to complete it on time as it was a troublesome one. Be that as it may, I imagined that I was completely fit for pulling off any undertaking, regardless of how troublesome it was, despite the fact that I realized that the errand would represent a significant test to me. I despite everything acknowledged that task simply because I would not like to demonstrate my shortcomings to other people. Furthermore, I likewise needed to make some "amazing" factor among my cohorts. Be that as it may, as the ideal opportunity for presenting the assignment was drawing nearer, I was turning out to be apprehensive in light of the fact that I wasn't going anywhere near completing my errand. In this way, I requested some extra time from my educator, and he concurred. However, despite everything I couldn't complete the assignment on schedule, leaving me humiliated before my different schoolmates. What's more, around then, I understood that I ought to have been consistent with myself, having any unmistakable thought regarding my own capacity and aptitudes. Anyway, the training, I learned in my grade school, had constantly constrained me since to break down any circumstance completely by requiring some investment before settling on any choice whether they were huge or little. Plus, this specific exercise additionally had instructed me to be modest before others, regardless of whether I had enough motivations to gloat.
The exercise, I learned, was that we should all stay
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consistent
with ourselves
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consistent
.
Obviously
, I definitely realized that coming clean to others was significant,
yet
I was curious about with being
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consistent
with myself until I arrived at fifth grade. Truth be
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told
, I found out about this significant exercise in a
fairly
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hard
manner when I neglected to complete my
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own
science task on
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schedule


Anyway, the scientific venture, I picked, was a
fairly
troublesome one. Notwithstanding,
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before
allocating the activity, my science educator had over and over inquired
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as to whether
I had the option to complete it on time as it was a troublesome one. Be that as it may, I imagined that I was completely fit for pulling off any undertaking, regardless of how troublesome it was, despite the fact that I realized that the errand would represent a significant
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test
to me.

I despite everything acknowledged that task
simply
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because
I would not like to demonstrate my shortcomings to other
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people
.
Furthermore
, I
likewise
needed to
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make
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some
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
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amazing
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"
factor among my cohorts. Be that as it may, as the ideal opportunity for presenting the assignment was drawing nearer, I was turning out to be apprehensive in light of the fact that I wasn't going anywhere near completing my errand. In this way, I requested
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some
extra time from my educator, and he concurred.
However
, despite everything I couldn't complete the assignment on schedule, leaving me humiliated
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before
my
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different
schoolmates. What's more, around then, I understood that I ought to have been
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
consistent
with myself, having any unmistakable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
regarding my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
capacity and aptitudes.

Anyway, the training, I learned in my grade school, had
constantly
constrained me since to break down any circumstance completely by requiring
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
investment
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
before
settling on any choice whether they were huge or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
. Plus, this specific exercise
additionally
had instructed me to be modest
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before
others, regardless of whether I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
motivations to gloat.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay TPO 42Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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