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Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: - Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem v.1

Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: - Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem v. 1
It is a prevalent belief that nuclear energy is more beneficial than other potential sources to meet the world's demands. From my perspective, although nuclear has been acknowledged as one of the most important vital sources, which can match the increasing strength demands, renewable resources such as the Sun might be a better option. To begin with, why I believe that nuclear is a good choice, the amount of power that brought out from a nuclear plant is magnificently more than other options, such as water dams. What I mean by this is that the power comes from a nuclear plant is ten times stronger than an average dam can produce. To further clarify this with an instance, I can state that Turkey has over than 70 dams, yet these are merely as powerful as seven nuclear plants and construction of seven nuclear plants could cost cheaper in the country. Therefore, nuclear would be a better alternative than dams. Moving onto the reason why I claim the Sun possibly a better choice than nuclear, the Sun is a renewable energy source, which is not only harmless but also endless and more powerful. In other words, the stamina is offered by the star is better than any other alternatives. To illustrate, the amount of sun lights that touch on the earth's surface for a minute is adequate to meet the whole world's two years of strength need. Therefore, as soon as technological advancements can benefit from the Sun more effectively, humankind will not need another stamina source anymore. All in all, taking the aforementioned points into account, it can be concluded that although nuclear is a better option than available alternatives, the Sun will be able to the best power source in close future.
It is a prevalent belief that nuclear energy is more beneficial than
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other
potential
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sources
to
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meet
the world's demands. From my perspective, although nuclear has
been acknowledged
as one of the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
vital
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sources
, which can match the increasing strength demands, renewable resources such as the
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Sun
might be a
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better
option.

To
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begin
with, why I believe that nuclear is a
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good
choice, the amount of power that brought out from a nuclear
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plant
is
magnificently
more than
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other
options, such as water dams. What I mean by this is that the power
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comes
from a nuclear
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plant
is ten times stronger than an average dam can produce. To
further
clarify this with an instance, I can state that Turkey has
Use "(over)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
over
than 70 dams,
yet
these are
merely
as powerful as seven nuclear
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plants
and construction of seven nuclear
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plants
could cost cheaper in the country.
Therefore
, nuclear would be a
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better
alternative than dams.

Moving onto the reason why I claim the
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Sun
possibly
a
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better
choice than nuclear, the
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Sun
is a renewable energy
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source
, which is not
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only
harmless
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but
also
endless and more powerful. In
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other
words, the stamina
is offered
by the star is
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better
than any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
alternatives. To illustrate, the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sun
lights that touch on the earth's surface for a minute is adequate to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the whole world's two years of strength need.
Therefore
, as
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soon
as technological advancements can benefit from the
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Sun
more
effectively
, humankind will not need another stamina
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source
anymore.

All in all, taking the aforementioned points into account, it can
be concluded
that although nuclear is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
option than available alternatives, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sun
will be able to the best power
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
source
in close future.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: - Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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