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Word framing is a person's way of describing a situation. A situation could sound negative or positive and people will react differently to each one. For example, if someone asks how much juice is in left in the bottle and you say it is half-full, th v.1

Word framing is a person's way of describing a situation. A situation could sound negative or positive and people will react differently to each one. For example, if someone asks how much juice is in left in the bottle and you say it is half-full, th v. 1
Currently, some countries has plethora of youngsters compared with high age persons in their population. However, more nations have had opposite or equal proportion. This essay will cover the positives and negatives of this situation. Firstly, one nation which includes number of teenagers has good growth in their economy, education, culture, technology. For instance, the government will create opportunity for graduates that will creates way to increase growth rate in the economy and from IT industries a new technology established by them. Secondly, the sociable responsibilities will increase in their society. For example, if anyone met an accident on the road they are the first to reach spot immediately and contact emergency medical for them. In a negative point of view, they will create a group with them and find the hard ways to become top position in the community. For instance, if any, events like race, games or any competition between gangs will form a war while running it, however, sometimes will be controlled while starting any events with strong police security. The main disadvantage is unemployment in their districts, due to overpopulation only some can get job others keep on searching. This cause crime, they start doing some illegal activities to earn money and survey in this world. To recapitulate, increase in teenagers is good for the countries which helps in many ways. However, creating job opportunities for them is more important for their government it gives wonderful lives, rather it encourage them to move on wrong path to spoil their whole life.
Currently
,
some
countries has plethora of youngsters compared with high age persons in their population.
However
, more nations have had opposite or equal proportion. This essay will cover the positives and negatives of this situation.

Firstly
, one nation which includes number of
teenagers
has
good
growth in their economy, education, culture, technology.
For instance
, the
government
will create opportunity for graduates that will creates way to increase growth rate in the economy and from IT industries a new technology established by them.
Secondly
, the sociable responsibilities will increase in their society.
For example
, if anyone met an accident on the road they are the
first
to reach spot immediately and contact emergency medical for them.

In a
negative
point of view, they will create a group with them and find the
hard
ways to become top position in the community.
For instance
, if any,
events
like race, games or any competition between gangs will form a war while running it,
however
,
sometimes
will
be controlled
while starting any
events
with strong police security. The main disadvantage is unemployment in their districts, due to overpopulation
only
some
can
get
job others
keep
on searching. This cause crime, they
start
doing
some
illegal activities to earn money and survey in this world.

To recapitulate, increase in
teenagers
is
good
for the countries which
helps
in
many
ways.
However
, creating job opportunities for them is more
important
for their
government
it gives wonderful
lives
,
rather
it
encourage
them to
move
on
wrong
path to spoil their whole life.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Word framing is a person's way of describing a situation. A situation could sound negative or positive and people will react differently to each one. For example, if someone asks how much juice is in left in the bottle and you say it is half-full, th v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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