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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v.2

With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 2
E-books are becoming increasingly common these days around the world. With the advent and popularity of e-books and e-readers, the sales of paper books has been on a gradual decline. This essay will discuss that while this trend has a few advantages, such as convenience and cost, it also has a few downsides that are taking away the personal memories and experiences from the people. Young adults, mainly millennials, are big supporters of technology and prefer electronic devices for most of their leisure activities. Due to this, electronic reading devices, or e-readers, are becoming quite popular these days. These e-readers are not only compact and ergonomic but can also carry thousands of books in them, making the overall reading experience extremely convenient. For instance, people who like to read while they travel, prefer to carry just one e-reader with multiple e-books than carrying the heavy paper based books. Moreover, another advantage of e-books is that they are quite cost effective. For example, it costs the same to buy 10 paper books as it costs to buy an e-reader with 20 e-books. Above all, e-books are good for the environment as well, as paper books need a lot of trees to print. Thus, the electronic book industry is offering quite big advantages over the paper book industry. Having said that, the electronic books lack the overall reading experience that paper books have been providing for centuries. For instance, people who identify themselves as old school, prefer the physical books for their touch, feel, and smell. In addition, people also relate the paper books with their memories. As an example, for a lot of people, a book read on a special vacation acts as a nostalgic memory for the entire lifetime. Therefore, for many people, the act of moving away from paper books is an act of moving away from the true reading experience. This essay discussed that being cheaper, convenient, and eco-friendly, e-books and their rise over the paper books is a step in a positive direction. This essay also discussed that a section of people does not see this as a positive trend as it takes them away from the authentic reading experience and memories.
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increasingly
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books
has been on a gradual decline. This essay will discuss that while this trend has a few advantages, such as convenience and
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cost
, it
also
has a few downsides that are taking
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away
the personal
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memories
and
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experiences
from the
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people
.

Young adults,
mainly
millennials, are
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big
supporters of technology and prefer
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electronic
devices for most of their leisure activities. Due to this,
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electronic
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reading
devices, or e-readers, are becoming quite popular these days. These e-readers are not
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only
compact and ergonomic
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but
can
also
carry thousands of
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books
in them, making the
overall
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reading
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experience
extremely
convenient.
For instance
,
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people
who like to read while they travel, prefer to carry
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just
one e-reader with multiple e-books than carrying the heavy paper based
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books
.
Moreover
, another advantage of e-books is that they are quite
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cost
effective.
For example
, it
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costs
the same to
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buy
10 paper
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books
as it
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costs
to
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an e-reader with 20 e-books.
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, e-books are
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good
for the environment
as well
, as paper
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books
need
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a lot of
trees to print.
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, the
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electronic
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book
industry is offering quite
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big
advantages over the paper
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book
industry.

Having said that, the
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electronic
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books
lack the
overall
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reading
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experience
that paper
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books
have been providing for centuries.
For instance
,
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people
who identify themselves as
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old
school, prefer the physical
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books
for their touch, feel, and smell.
In addition
,
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people
also
relate the paper
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books
with their
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memories
. As an example, for
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a lot of
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people
, a
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read on a special vacation acts as a nostalgic
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memory
for the entire lifetime.
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, for
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many
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people
, the act of moving
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away
from paper
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books
is an act of moving
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away
from the true
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reading
experience.

This essay discussed that being cheaper, convenient, and eco-friendly, e-books and their rise over the paper
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books
is a step in a
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positive
direction. This essay
also
discussed that a section of
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people
does not
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see
this as a
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positive
trend as it takes them
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away
from the authentic
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reading
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experience
and
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memories
.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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