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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v.3

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v. 3
Language is a way to communicate your ideas, thoughts and opinion with people. In this modern era, English has become a global language, which is essential to learn. It is a considerable decline in the interest to learn the local language. Some of those are very near to extinction. In my opinion, it is a must necessary for everyone to learn English. At the same time, it is equally essential to determine a local language. To being with this, nowadays over 50 countries are using the English language for their routine which most of them are well developed where people like to settle over there for their good lifestyle. Furthermore, Most of the well-developed countries are accepting abroad students these days as the US, the UK and Canada, which are known for higher education and they required English speech. Moreover, people wish to get a high paying job in fulfilling their dreams. Most of the multinational companies are accepting those students or pupils who know the English language and speak English very fluently, so it is very necessary to learn English. However, it is highly extensive to learn English, but it must be essential to preserve the local language. The decreased in using the local language, it means that it is death and language death means culture death. There are many books which are full of knowledge and wisdom and which are written in the local language. For instance, Ayurveda is written in Sanskrit and in that book there are many solutions to prevent many tips of diseases if no one knows this language, it is very difficult to understand that book.
Language
is a way to communicate your
ideas
, thoughts and opinion with
people
. In this modern era, English has become a global
language
, which is essential to
learn
. It is a considerable decline in the interest to
learn
the
local
language
.
Some
of those are
very
near to extinction. In my opinion, it is a
must
necessary for everyone to
learn
English. At the same time, it is
equally
essential to determine a
local
language.

To being with this, nowadays over 50 countries are using the English
language
for their routine which most of them are
well developed
where
people
like to settle over there for their
good
lifestyle.
Furthermore
, Most of the well-
developed countries
are accepting abroad students these days as the US, the UK and Canada, which
are known
for higher
education and
they required English speech.
Moreover
,
people
wish to
get
a high paying job in fulfilling their dreams. Most of the multinational
companies
are accepting those students or pupils who know the English
language
and speak English
very
fluently
,
so
it is
very
necessary to
learn
English.

However
, it is
highly
extensive to
learn
English,
but
it
must
be essential to preserve the
local
language
. The decreased in using the
local
language
, it means that it is death and
language
death means culture death. There are
many
books which are full of knowledge and wisdom and which
are written
in the
local
language
.
For instance
, Ayurveda
is written
in Sanskrit and in that book there are
many
solutions to
prevent
many
tips of diseases if no one knows this
language
, it is
very
difficult to understand that book.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v. 3

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