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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v.3

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v. 3
Language is a way to communicate your ideas, thoughts and opinion with people. In this modern era, English has become a global language, which is essential to learn. It is a considerable decline in the interest to learn the local language. Some of those are very near to extinction. In my opinion, it is a must necessary for everyone to learn English. At the same time, it is equally essential to determine a local language. To being with this, nowadays over 50 countries are using the English language for their routine which most of them are well developed where people like to settle over there for their good lifestyle. Furthermore, Most of the well-developed countries are accepting abroad students these days as the US, the UK and Canada, which are known for higher education and they required English speech. Moreover, people wish to get a high paying job in fulfilling their dreams. Most of the multinational companies are accepting those students or pupils who know the English language and speak English very fluently, so it is very necessary to learn English. However, it is highly extensive to learn English, but it must be essential to preserve the local language. The decreased in using the local language, it means that it is death and language death means culture death. There are many books which are full of knowledge and wisdom and which are written in the local language. For instance, Ayurveda is written in Sanskrit and in that book there are many solutions to prevent many tips of diseases if no one knows this language, it is very difficult to understand that book.
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ideas
, thoughts and opinion with
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people
. In this modern era, English has become a global
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language
, which is essential to
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learn
. It is a considerable decline in the interest to
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learn
the
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local
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language
.
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Some
of those are
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near to extinction. In my opinion, it is a
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must
necessary for everyone to
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learn
English. At the same time, it is
equally
essential to determine a
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local
language.

To being with this, nowadays over 50 countries are using the English
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language
for their routine which most of them are
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well developed
where
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people
like to settle over there for their
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good
lifestyle.
Furthermore
, Most of the well-
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developed countries
are accepting abroad students these days as the US, the UK and Canada, which
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for higher
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education and
they required English speech.
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fluently
,
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necessary to
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local
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language
. The decreased in using the
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local
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language
, it means that it is death and
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language
death means culture death. There are
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many
books which are full of knowledge and wisdom and which
are written
in the
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local
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language
.
For instance
, Ayurveda
is written
in Sanskrit and in that book there are
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many
solutions to
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many
tips of diseases if no one knows this
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, it is
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difficult to understand that book.
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20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? v. 3

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
272 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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