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With the recent improvement to internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. it is good n=or bad thing. discuss both v.2

With the recent improvement to internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. it is good n=or bad thing. 2
Technology has affected all aspects of our life and one of them is the way we do shopping through internet. There is no doubt that in correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool. However, if used for the wrong purpose, it becomes dangerous weapon and detrimental to both individual and corporate business. Technology has eased out our life tremendously. Nowadays, we do not need to go into the hassle of mega shopping complexes, rather we can buy any product or services, within the walls of our homes and in the comfort of our beds. All major brands have their exclusive websites, so customer can compare prices among different products and sellers. Anything can be bought by the click of a button and delivered at out doorstep and payments are also processed through credit cards. The trend of buying anything online has gained a momentum as we do not need to spare time for shopping from our hectic work schedule. However, there are companies, who is taking advantage of this trend by selling fake things. They make their websites, flashy and attractive, marketing department of companies uses different shades of light and online software to modify them completely. Sometimes the product delivered is totally opposite of what we see online. To overcome this threat and spending an enormous amount of hard earned money on fake products, reviews and opinions left by previous buyers gives us gist of information about the product, how’s the quality? , is it worth the money? , How it works? , How it looks in real? - because customers sometimes posts the photos of bought clothes, shoes, gadgets and accessories. These help upcoming customers in decision making to buy best bet and also companies get feedback and know the demand, which helps them incredibly to tailor their production and marketing strategy according to the demand of customers. Having thought about it, I believe opinions and reviews are extremely essential and helping other fellow buyers to have complete and comprehensive information about the product or service. This will also demotivate fake companies and compels them to make and sell competitive products.
Technology has
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affected
all aspects of our life and one of them is the way we
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do shopping
through internet. There is no doubt that in correct circumstances, this is a valuable tool.
However
, if
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used
for the
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wrong
purpose, it becomes
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dangerous
weapon and detrimental to both individual and corporate business.

Technology has
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eased
out our life
tremendously
. Nowadays, we do not need to go into the hassle of mega shopping complexes,
rather
we can
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buy
any
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product
or services, within the walls of our homes and in the comfort of our beds. All major brands have their exclusive websites,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
customer can compare prices among
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different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
and sellers. Anything can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
by the click of a button and delivered at out doorstep and payments are
also
processed through credit cards.

The trend of buying anything online has gained a momentum as we do not need to spare time for shopping from our hectic work schedule.
However
, there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
, who is taking advantage of this trend by selling fake things. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
their websites, flashy and attractive, marketing department of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
shades of light and online software to modify them completely.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
delivered is
totally
opposite of what we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
online.

To overcome this threat and spending an enormous amount of
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
hard earned
money on fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
, reviews and opinions
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
by previous buyers gives us gist of information about the
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product
, how’s the quality?
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,
is it worth the money?
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,
How it works?
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,
How it looks in real?
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-
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because
customers
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sometimes
posts the photos of
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bought
clothes, shoes, gadgets and accessories. These
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help
upcoming customers in
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decision making
to
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buy
best bet and
also
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companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
feedback and know the demand, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
them
incredibly
to tailor their production and marketing strategy according to the demand of customers.

Having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
about it, I believe opinions and reviews are
extremely
essential and helping other fellow buyers to have complete and comprehensive information about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
or service. This will
also
demotivate fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
and compels them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
and sell competitive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay With the recent improvement to internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. it is good n=or bad thing. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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