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Competition increases in every person's life. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.2

Competition increases in every person's life. v. 2
In this modern era, competition play essential role in everyperson life. Without competition, we do not know about our mistakes. Basides that, competition has greatly impact on all the children. However, nowadays competition has extremely increased at all the places. Although, l agree that competition increases the level of every child and every person. Moreover, it is true that " practice can make men more perfect' ' . Competition also teaches to work hard in life of every person. Furthermore, l notify that only the hard work is key to success. In the epilogue, competition is more and more heavy than nowadays.
In this modern era,
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play essential role in
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everyperson
life. Without
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, we do not know about our mistakes.

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Basides
that,
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competition
has
greatly
impact on all the children.
However
, nowadays
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has
extremely
increased at all the places. Although, l
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agree
that
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increases the level of every child and every person.
Moreover
, it is true that
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make
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more
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perfect&
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Competition
also
teaches
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to work
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hard
in life of every person.
Furthermore
, l notify that
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only
the
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hard
work is key to success.

In the epilogue,
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is more and more heavy than nowadays.
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6Mistakes

IELTS essay Competition increases in every person's life. v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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