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with the recent improvements to the internet, poeple can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. is this good or bad, discuss both side and giving your opinion. v.2

with the recent improvements to the internet, poeple can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. is this good or bad, v. 2
The techonolgy has been given a paramount importance. With the development of internet milleninials are taking its multifarious benefits to its full extent. There are range of reasons of this such as online shopping sites, banking service, ticket buying and so on. People can use this service sitting at home with just a click and if it is fruitful giving the service high reveiws if its useless than filling the empty box full of bad comments. I shall look into both sides before forming an opinion. In the yester years, internet can be used by rich people who have access to smartphones and computers. Barely, any student can use the world wide web for the information. The internet was like once in a blue moon for medium class families. Due to the advancements in the internet, now each and every person have access to the intent. It has now become a cheap source of communication, trade and source. In the back days, It was like counting on fingers to buy any thing via web and then get back shipping in a month. for instance, if a elite woman who wants to buy dress they have to go through a many process and verification. Then they can have their purchased item deliver at their home in a month. At that time people value and respects the internet policies. They don' t get frustrated on the shipping material or their internet services. Besides they were quite glad to get their things availability at home without going to the preferred location. On the contrary, juvenile delinquency is mainly responsible for this kind of unethical things. Nowadays, youngsters borrow things from the websites. It has become convenient for them to browe the google and click and have anything they worth within minutes. For example, their are maximum of applications on playstores of every website. such as MacDonald, Td bank app, Sep hora and so on. Any one can use this facility if a elder wants to eat pizza they can order online and they don' t like their service they put it under bad reviews. This is the way through which others are able to know the right and misleading things from their opinions and reviews. in my personal opinion, i think this is the best way and a positive trend through which other people will have useful information of that service by seeing their reviews whether to buy or not. To put it in nutshell, technology has its two sides, we can use it in our favor or suspenseful way. in earlier times people can have its access with a full trust.
The
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techonolgy
has been
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given
a paramount importance. With the development of internet
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milleninials
are taking its multifarious benefits to its full extent. There are range of reasons of this such as online shopping sites, banking
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service
, ticket buying and
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so
on.
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People
can
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use
this
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service
sitting at home with
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just
a click and if it is fruitful giving the
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service
high
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reveiws
if its
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useless
than filling the empty box full of
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bad
comments. I shall look into both sides
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before
forming an opinion.

In the
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yester
years, internet can be
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used
by rich
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people
who have access to smartphones and computers.
Barely
, any student can
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use
the
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
world wide web
for the information. The internet was like once in a blue moon for medium
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class
families. Due to the advancements
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".
in the internet
,
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now
each and every person have access to the intent. It has
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now
become a
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cheap
source of communication, trade and source. In the back days, It was like counting on fingers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
Did you mean "anything"?
any thing
via web and then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
back shipping in a month.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
for
instance, if
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
elite woman who wants to
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buy
dress they
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have to
go through a
Possible agreement error. The noun process seems to be countable; consider using: "many processes".
many process
and verification. Then they can have their
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purchased
item deliver at their home in a month. At that time
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people
value and respects the internet policies. They
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don&
#039; t
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get
frustrated on the shipping material or their internet
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Besides
they were quite glad to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
their things availability at home without going to the preferred location.

On the contrary
, juvenile delinquency is
mainly
responsible for this kind of unethical things. Nowadays, youngsters borrow things from the websites. It has become convenient for them to
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browe
the
"Google" is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.
google
and click and have anything they worth within minutes.
For example
,
Did you mean "there"?
their
are maximum of applications on
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playstores
of every website.
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such
as MacDonald,
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Td
bank app, Sep hora and
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so
on.
Did you mean "Anyone"?
Any one
can
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use
this facility if
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
elder wants to eat pizza they can order
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
online and
they
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don&
#039; t like their
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service
they put it under
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bad
reviews. This is the way through which others are able to know the right and misleading things from their opinions and reviews.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
my personal opinion,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
this is the best way and a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
trend through which other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will have useful information of that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
by seeing their reviews whether to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
or not.

To put it in nutshell, technology has its two sides, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it in our favor or suspenseful way.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
earlier times
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can have its access with a full trust.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Mistakes

IELTS essay with the recent improvements to the internet, poeple can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. is this good or bad, v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
439 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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