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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, magazines and newspapers will soon be past. Others claim that these forms of media will never disappear. what are causes? ? what are solutions? v.1

With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, magazines and newspapers will soon be past. Others claim that these forms of media will never disappear. what are causes? ? what are solutions? v. 1
Sophisticated technologies are increasing gradually. A number of individuals claim that books, newspapers and magazines will be extinct because of dominance of e-books. However, others view that these types of platforms will ever exist. The essay will subscribe to the opinion that printed multimedia will never be covered by screen reading methods. Today, we are observing several people prioritize electrical reader in some respects. Firstly, many individuals love to study in Mobile, Computer or Notepad during leisure When individuals are in transportation, that's the time they think that they should not waste time wittingly. As a result, there prefer to read books, novels, in PDF or DOC version. Secondly, various people lack considerable money so that to save cost, they choose to study in screen. They do not conceive that reading in touchable system is redundant. For example, statistics demonstrated that most Americans pass their interval time by studying story books, newspapers in computers. But the remaining hours, they have the proclivity in handmade books. On the other hand, those who are in favour of tangible books indicate that paper-based platforms are still favourable to almost countries worldwide. The next point is some fully fledged doctors warn that screen-based networks such as Mobile Phone, Computer, Tab are noxious for human civilization. Afterwards, civilized societies will attempt to forbear them as much as possible. For instance, Japan government ordered students not to carry any electronic device. Furthermore, citizens are requested to pay heed to ready-made books, newspapers instead of modern instruments. To conclude, in some cases, people are compelled to consume screen reader devices. Otherwise public tend to have a penchant on printed materials.
Sophisticated technologies are increasing
gradually
. A number of individuals claim that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, newspapers and magazines will be extinct
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of dominance of e-books.
However
, others view that these types of platforms will ever exist. The essay will subscribe to the opinion that printed multimedia will never
be covered
by screen reading methods.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
, we are observing several
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prioritize electrical reader in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
respects.
Firstly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
individuals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to study in Mobile, Computer or Notepad during leisure When individuals are in transportation, that's the time they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that they should not waste time
wittingly
.
As a result
, there prefer to read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, novels, in PDF or DOC version.
Secondly
, various
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
lack considerable money
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that to save cost, they choose to study in screen. They do not conceive that reading in touchable system is redundant.
For example
, statistics demonstrated that most Americans pass their interval time by studying story
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, newspapers in computers.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the remaining hours, they have the proclivity in handmade books.

On the other hand
, those who are in
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of tangible
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
indicate that paper-based platforms are
still
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.
favourable
to almost countries worldwide. The
next
point is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
fully
fledged doctors warn that screen-based networks such as Mobile Phone, Computer, Tab are noxious for human civilization. Afterwards, civilized societies will attempt to forbear them as much as possible.
For instance
, Japan
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
ordered students not to carry any electronic device.
Furthermore
, citizens
are requested
to pay heed to ready-made
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, newspapers
instead
of modern instruments.

To conclude
, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cases,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are compelled
to consume screen reader devices.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Otherwise
public tend to have a penchant on printed materials.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, magazines and newspapers will soon be past. Others claim that these forms of media will never disappear. what are causes? ? what are solutions? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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