With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic sub v.3
With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic sub v. 3
The majority of< span style=" font-size: 19. 36px; " > schools devote most of the school day to academic classes and are planning to < /span> < span style=" font-size: 19. 36px; " > cut< /span> < span style=" font-size: 19. 36px; " > the time for physical education and other non-academic classes. However, not everyone agrees with this way of dividing up the school day. While there are people who think that school should only be about academics, others believe that physical education is also important for the children' s lives, and I agree with this point of view.
Some people feel that school < /span> should be< span style=" font-size: 19. 36px; " > all about academics. According to this point of view, children need to spend their entire school day learning math, science, literature, and history. Devoting time to these subjects is the best way to prepare children for their future university education and careers. If children enjoy play sports, they should do it outside of school time.
Other people, however, feel that physical education is an important part of a child' s education. According to this point of view, physical education teaches children important skills such as teamwork, leadership, and how to win and lose gracefully. In addition, physical education classes are the best way to < /span> ensure< span style=" font-size: 19. 36px; " > that children get regular physical exercise that they need to stay healthy. Finally, if children spend a little time every day being physically active, it helps them concentrate better on their academic work.
I agree that devoting some school time to physical education is necessary. If schools don' t give importance to physical education, children will not learn that it is important. They won' t get the exercise they need to grow up healthy. They won' t choose to play sports if no one teaches them that they are important.
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school
day. While there are
people
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think
that
school
should
only
be about
academics
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physical
education
is
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lives
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agree
with this point of view.
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academics
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children
need
to spend their entire
school
day learning math, science, literature, and history. Devoting
time
to these subjects is the best way to prepare
children
for their future university
education
and careers. If
children
enjoy play sports, they should do it outside of
school
time.
Other
people
,
however
, feel that
physical
education
is an
important
part of a
child&
#039; s
education
. According to this point of view,
physical
education
teaches
children
important
skills
such as teamwork, leadership, and how to win and lose
gracefully
.
In addition
,
physical
education
classes are the best way to
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; that
children
get
regular
physical
exercise that they
need
to stay healthy.
Finally
, if
children
spend a
little
time
every day being
physically
active, it
helps
them concentrate better on their
academic
work.
I
agree
that devoting
some
school
time
to
physical
education
is necessary. If
schools
don&
#039; t give importance to
physical
education
,
children
will not learn that it is
important
. They
won&
#039; t
get
the exercise they
need
to grow up healthy. They
won&
#039; t choose to play sports if no one teaches them that they are
important
.
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important
,
but
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children
for all aspects of life, without excluding the care of their
physical
health.
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