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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree v.3

With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem v. 3
It is thought by some that the most concerning problem is how to feed a big number of people as world population is growing, so few people consider that GM foods is a vital solution to tackle this issue. In my opinion, I believe that GM foods can help people as they can grow everywhere around the year and healthy for people organism. Researches created different types of GM foods and the main feature is that they are adaptable for different weather conditions. Moreover, some GM foods can be planted in desert regions and in poor soil and despite harsh weather conditions, they still can give rich harvest to people. In addition, GM plants grow faster than usual plants and can give crops three or four times a year what is beneficial for people as they can eat different vegetables and fruits within a year. For example, in our country farmers started to plant GM apple trees as a result people can afford to eat them around the year for reasonable price. Another point to consider is that gene modified foods are not harmful for people’s health. According to recent research GM foods contain the same amount of crucial vitamins and proteins also scientists modified its gene structure and such foods can be saved for longer time. Furthermore, GM foods have delicious taste and people like to eat them also such foods have beautiful appearance. In conclusion, GM foods can be beneficial for people as they rich with crucial vitamins and can give crops around the year in different weather conditions.
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that the most concerning problem is how to feed a
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people
as world population is growing,
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people
consider that GM
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foods
is a vital solution to tackle this issue. In my opinion, I believe that GM
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foods
can
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help
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people
as they can grow everywhere around the
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year
and healthy for
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people
organism.

Researches created
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different
types of GM
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foods
and the main feature is that they are adaptable for
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different
weather conditions.
Moreover
,
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some
GM
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foods
can
be planted
in desert regions and in poor soil and despite harsh weather conditions, they
still
can give rich harvest to
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people
.
In addition
, GM plants grow faster than usual plants and can give crops three or four times a
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year
what is beneficial for
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people
as they can eat
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different
vegetables and fruits within a
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year
.
For example
, in our country farmers
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started
to plant GM apple trees
as a result
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people
can afford to eat them around the
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year
for reasonable price.

Another point to consider is that gene modified
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foods
are not harmful for
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people’s
health. According to recent research GM
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foods
contain the same amount of crucial vitamins and proteins
also
scientists modified its gene structure and such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
can
be saved
for longer time.
Furthermore
, GM
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foods
have delicious taste and
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people
like to eat them
also
such
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foods
have
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beautiful
appearance.

In conclusion
, GM
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foods
can be beneficial for
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people
as they rich with crucial vitamins and can give crops around the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
in
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different
weather conditions.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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