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Will English Remain A Global Language Despite Globalisation? Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalisation? v.1

Will English Remain A Global Language Despite Globalisation? Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalisation? v. 1
Throughout the world, English is considered as a link language that enables speakers of different mother tongues to communicate with one another. Some people argue that in this age of globalization, English may get replaced by another prominent language. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, instead of shaking the prominence of English as a global language, globalization will only reinforce it. English has more speakers than any other language in the world. Actually, the majority of them speak English as a second language. This is a clear indication of its popularity outside of English speaking countries like the USA, the UK and Australia. No other language enjoys this kind of reach. Of course, languages like Mandarin and Hindi are gaining prominence because many businesses are moving to China and India. This, however, does not mean that Mandarin or Hindi will replace English. While it is true that these languages have a considerable number of speakers within their countries, they are almost never used outside. This is not the case with English. Another factor that bolsters the popularity of English is the fact that much of the scientific literature is written in English. In other words, anyone who wants to stay abreast of the developments in science and technology need to know English. In addition, the vast majority of websites on the internet are in English. That means people who have a working knowledge of English have access to an endless pool of information. That explains why even countries like China and Japan have started teaching English in schools. To conclude, English is the language of opportunity and communication. As trade and commerce increase between countries, other languages may also gain more speakers. However, the argument that they will replace English as the language of communication does not hold water in view of the points mentioned above.
Throughout the world, English
is considered
as a link
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language
that enables speakers of
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different
mother tongues to communicate with one another.
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people
argue that in this age of globalization, English may
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get
replaced by another prominent
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language
. I do not
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agree
with this view. In my opinion,
instead
of shaking the prominence of English as a global
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language
, globalization will
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only
reinforce it.

English has more speakers than any
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other
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language
in the world. Actually, the majority of them speak English as a second
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language
. This is a
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clear
indication of its popularity outside of
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English speaking
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countries
like the USA, the UK and Australia. No
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other
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language
enjoys this kind of reach.

Of course
,
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languages
like Mandarin and Hindi are gaining prominence
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because
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many
businesses are moving to China and India. This,
however
, does not mean that Mandarin or Hindi will replace English. While it is true that these
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languages
have a considerable number of speakers within their
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countries
, they are almost never
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used
outside. This is not the case with English.

Another factor that bolsters the popularity of English is the fact that much of the scientific literature
is written
in English. In
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other
words, anyone who wants to stay abreast of the developments in science and technology need to know English.
In addition
, the vast majority of websites on the internet are in English. That means
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people
who have a working knowledge of English have access to an endless pool of information. That
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explains
why even
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countries
like China and Japan have
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started
teaching English in schools.

To conclude
, English is the
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language
of opportunity and communication. As trade and commerce increase between
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countries
,
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other
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languages
may
also
gain more speakers.
However
, the argument that they will replace English as the
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language
of communication does not hold water in view of the points mentioned above.
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IELTS essay Will English Remain A Global Language Despite Globalisation? Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalisation? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
310 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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