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DO YOU THINK THE SIGNIFICANCE OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE AS AN INTERNATIONAL LANGUAGE WILL BE LOST WITH GLOBALISATION OR ITS SIGNIFICANCE WILL INCREASE WITH GLOBALISATION? WHAT IS YOUR OPINION? v.1

DO YOU THINK THE SIGNIFICANCE OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE AS AN INTERNATIONAL LANGUAGE WILL BE LOST WITH GLOBALISATION OR ITS SIGNIFICANCE WILL INCREASE WITH GLOBALISATION? WHAT IS YOUR OPINION? v. 1
English is a globally accepted language and it plays an important role in globalization. Even though a rise in internationalization is a considerable threat to the English language, its importance will be long-lasting while communicating in the global platform. This essay will argue why no other languages can replace the significance of this language in this contemporary world. Firstly, the English language is the common language on the global level. To add on, the mass of different nations are using English for oral and written communication when they meet together in a foreign destination. Both will be new to the place and therefore, the spoken language will be this. For example, in the European Union, various nations representatives prefer to provide a speech in English which can be understood by viewers around the globe. Needless to say, this universal language will not get affected by rising globalization. Secondly, this linguistic as a medium of communication is in a rising trend of all nations, who is involved in immigration. They only send an invitation to those applicants who scored a decent band score in IELTS or TOFEL or other English language tests. A growing number of test-takers are the main pros for the organizations involve in taking such tests. Dreaming of such powerful nations, who are developed, are putting more emphasis on the importance of English as the candidates' level of English is directly proportionate to the CRS score. For instance, Canada put the benchmark of CLB 7 in IELTS as the minimum requirement for eligibility criteria. This may be because English communication plays a pivotal role globally. To conclude, speaking in this language clarifies the actual essence of the message between the speaker and the listener. Hence, I believe the conversation will be more effective if English will continue as a first spoken language to communicate with a rise in globalization. guage to communicate with a rise in globalization.
English is a globally
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and it plays an
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important
role in globalization.
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language
, its importance will be long-lasting while communicating in the global platform. This essay will argue why no other
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languages
can replace the significance of this
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language
in this contemporary world.

Firstly
, the English
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is the common
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language
on the global level. To
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add
on, the mass of
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different
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nations
are using English for oral and written communication when they
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meet
together in a foreign destination. Both will be new to the place and
therefore
, the spoken
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language
will be this.
For example
, in the European Union, various
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nations
representatives prefer to provide a speech in English which can
be understood
by viewers around the globe. Needless to say, this universal
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language
will not
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get
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affected
by rising globalization.

Secondly
, this linguistic as a medium of communication is in a rising trend of all
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nations
, who
is involved
in immigration. They
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only
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send
an invitation to those applicants who scored a decent band score in IELTS or
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TOFEL
or other English
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language
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tests
. A growing number of
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test
-takers are the main pros for the organizations involve in taking such
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tests
. Dreaming of such powerful
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nations
, who
are developed
, are putting more emphasis on the importance of English as the candidates' level of English is
directly
proportionate to the CRS score.
For instance
, Canada put the benchmark of CLB 7 in IELTS as the minimum requirement for eligibility criteria. This may be
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because
English communication plays a pivotal role globally.

To conclude
, speaking in this
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language
clarifies the actual essence of the message between the speaker and the listener.
Hence
, I believe the conversation will be more effective if English will continue as a
first
spoken
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language
to communicate with a rise in globalization.
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guage
to communicate with a rise in globalization.
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15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay DO YOU THINK THE SIGNIFICANCE OF ENGLISH LANGUAGE AS AN INTERNATIONAL LANGUAGE WILL BE LOST WITH GLOBALISATION OR ITS SIGNIFICANCE WILL INCREASE WITH GLOBALISATION? WHAT IS YOUR OPINION? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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