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Which kind of movies do you prefer (serious ones that make you think or amusing and entertaining ones)? v.2

Which kind of movies do you prefer (serious ones that make you think or amusing and entertaining ones)? v. 2
Movies are now the integral part of humans life. Whenever the person get some he/she prefers to watch movie rather than spending time in other activities. There are wide range of movies are availble. Some people prefer to watch serious movies while some people prefer to watch entertaing movie. I will prefer to watch entertaining movies for the following reasons. Todays lifestyle is already stressful so entertaining movies are helpful to release that stress to some extent. After the stressful day at work light comedy will cheer up. For example, while preparing for the exam most the time I was studying. After studied for 2 hours I took a break for 1 hr to refresh myself and prepare myself to study again. During this break time I used to watched the comdey movies like Shrek and Descicable me. That movies were so comedy that I used to laugh at every scene and forgot about the stress of study. After watching movie for a while I again back to study with more focus and attention. And one advantage of watching comedy movie is that I don' t need to remember all story I can watch any scene from the comedy movie and enjoy it. Light comedy is what everyone needs to release the stress and entertaing movies are source of light comedy. Serious movies make impact on human life. Some scences from the serious movies are so offensive and inaapropriate or horrifying that human can not forgot it and it creates negativity in individuals. For example, when I was child, no one was at home and I was just stwitchinng between the channels. While doing so, I saw that Annabele movie was being telecast on television. Earlier I heard about that movie but never had the chance to watch it so I started watching the movie. While watching the movie I eraaly got scared. After that many times when I got woke up in the night I had the feeling that there is someone sitting over my wardrobe and watching me. Till date I haven' t overcome that fear. I got reaaly scared when I was alone at home. Serious movies have some contetwnt which are difficult to digest for normal people. So, its better to watch entertaing movies over serious movie. It' s not always true that serious movies create negatibve impact some movies are so useful to create public awareness among the people and some movie are knowledgable and educational. But entertaing movies] are fun. Entertaining movies also are educational and help to educate childern through ente.
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activities
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prefer to
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entertaing
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. I will prefer to
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entertaining
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following
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release that
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extent. After the stressful day at
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work


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light
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comedy
will cheer up.
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, while preparing for the
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exam


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most
the
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time
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break


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for
1 hr to refresh myself and prepare myself to study again. During
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this


break
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I
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comdey
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like Shrek and
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me
. That
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were
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so
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comedy
that I
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used
to laugh at every scene
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and


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forgot
about the
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stress
of study. After watching
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for a while
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I


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again
back to study with more focus and attention. And one advantage
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of


watching
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comedy
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is that I
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watch
any scene from the
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comedy
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movie
and enjoy it. Light
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is
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what


everyone needs to release the
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stress
and
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entertaing
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movies
are source of

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light
comedy.

Serious
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movies
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make
impact on human life.
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Some
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scences
from the
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serious


movies are
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so
offensive and
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inaapropriate
or horrifying that human can

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not
forgot it and it creates negativity in individuals.
For example
,
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when


I was child, no one was at
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home and
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channels
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, I
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that
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Annabele
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movie
was being telecast
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on


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television
. Earlier I heard about that
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movie
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but
never had the chance
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to


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watch
it
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so
I
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watching the
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. While watching the
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movie
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I


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eraaly
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scared. After that
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many
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times
when I
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woke up in the
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night


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watching
me. Till
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reaaly
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scared


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when
I was alone at home.
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Serious
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movies
have
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some
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contetwnt
which
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are


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difficult
to digest for normal
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people
.
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, its better to
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watch
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entertaing


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movies
over
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serious
movie.

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#039; s not always true that
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create
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negatibve
impact
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movies are
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useful to create public awareness among the
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and
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movie
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knowledgable
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entertaing
movies
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are fun.

Entertaining
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are educational and
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to educate
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childern


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through
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0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
66Mistakes

IELTS essay Which kind of movies do you prefer (serious ones that make you think or amusing and entertaining ones)? v. 2

Essay
  American English
37 paragraphs
428 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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