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When you studied abroad, you found a new friend that is now asking for your help to find a job in your country that will suits his qualification. State the job that is available. Reason why he will be choosen by the owner. Explain how will he apply for the p v.1

When you studied abroad, you found a new friend that is now asking for your help to find a job in your country that will suits his qualification. State the job that is available. Reason why he will be choosen by the owner. Explain how will he apply for the p v. 1
Polythene bags are the major source of earth pollution, argued by some. This essay agrees that banning these bags will lower the pollution levels of the world in both sea and land because bags produced from plastic are not biodegradable easily and will badly affect biodiversity as well. A polythene bag can take one million year to decompose itself. It shows the gravity of the situation that once these bags were spread all around, they took a longer time to become perishable. Choking of drainage, is the outcome of such activities. Throughout the world local governments are fighting hard to solve problems like these. One related example of it was the Ghana's local government, who spent billions of dollars in cleaning the drainage system being blocked by the elastic bags. Pollution adversely affects flora and fauna. Either it would be a land or offshore many species of animals and birds are dying due to consuming moulded materials. Sometime these bags are trapped around their neck or body and can kill them badly. According to World Wildlife Fund, in 2019 an average of hundred species is becoming extinct due to elastic related issues. The excessive use of plastic bags badly affected the beauty of the planet, which is depend upon the number of plans. Many plants, nowadays, die when an elastic bag covers them up. It is changing the soil quality hampering the growth of the plants and as a result the number of plants on land and at sea are decreasing day by day. To sum up, earth pollution is mainly contributed by moulded bags. Since the material is not biodegradable, easily creating many municipality problems and damaging different animals and plants.
Polythene
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bags
are the major source of earth pollution, argued by
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some
. This essay
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agrees
that banning these
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bags
will lower the pollution levels of the world in both sea and land
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because
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bags
produced from plastic are not biodegradable
easily
and will
badly
affect biodiversity
as well
.

A polythene
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bag
can take one million year to decompose itself. It
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shows
the gravity of the situation that once these
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bags
were spread
all around, they took a longer time to become perishable. Choking of drainage, is the outcome of such activities. Throughout the world local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
are fighting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to solve problems like these. One related example of it was the Ghana's local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
, who spent billions of dollars in cleaning the drainage system
being blocked
by the elastic bags.

Pollution
adversely
affects flora and fauna. Either it would be a land or offshore
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many
species of animals and birds are dying due to consuming
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moulded
materials. Sometime these
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bags
are trapped
around their neck or body and can kill them
badly
. According to World Wildlife Fund, in 2019 an average of hundred species is becoming extinct due to elastic related issues. The excessive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of plastic
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bags
badly
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affected
the beauty of the planet, which is
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depend
upon the number of plans.
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Many
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plants
, nowadays,
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die
when an elastic
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bag
covers them up. It is changing the soil quality hampering the growth of the
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plants
and
as a result
the number of
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plants
on land and at sea are decreasing day by day.

To sum up, earth pollution is
mainly
contributed by
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moulded
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bags
. Since the material is not biodegradable,
easily
creating
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many
municipality problems and damaging
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different
animals and
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plants
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay When you studied abroad, you found a new friend that is now asking for your help to find a job in your country that will suits his qualification. State the job that is available. Reason why he will be choosen by the owner. Explain how will he apply for the p v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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