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When traveling, do you prefer to stay at one place for a long time or spend less time but visit more places? v.1

When traveling, do you prefer to stay at one place for a long time or spend less time but visit more places? v. 1
There are several strategies for businesses to achieve success on a competitive market. It has been claimed that advertising is the principal reason for a successful business. In my opinion, it is not only through advertising that will bring a business to the top, but also through the quality of its products or services that will help maintain its prosperity. Certainly, marketing and promotion creates a huge impact on selling products or services. To begin, effective advertising creates brand awareness to the public especially target consumers. Through mass media and other ways of promotion, new and unknown companies establish themselves in the market and attract consumers who might want to try their product or services. Furthermore, advertising reminds customers of established companies of their existing products as well as new special offers. This helps companies be the first option and may increase customer loyalty. However, quality also plays a vital role in a successful business. After all, no matter how popular the product or services are by using marketing and promotion, if they are of poor standards then consumers cannot trust the company. In particular, most consumers are quality conscious, therefore, they will look for an alternative brand that will satisfy their standards. Moreover, quality consistency relatively builds brand credibility that helps in maintaining loyalty from the consumers so they will continue to purchase from the company in the future. In conclusion, although advertising is necessary in achieving business success as it is a strategy that attracts customers, I believe that a good quality of products and services is equally important because it builds consumer trust and the company’s reputation that maintains the loyalty of its customers, thus keeping the business at the top.
There are several strategies for
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businesses
to achieve success on a competitive market. It has
been claimed
that advertising is the principal reason for a successful
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business
. In my opinion, it is not
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only
through advertising that will bring a
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business
to the top,
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but
also
through the
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quality
of its
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products
or
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services
that will
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help
maintain its prosperity.

Certainly
, marketing and promotion creates a huge impact on selling
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products
or
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services
. To
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begin
, effective advertising creates brand awareness to the public
especially
target
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consumers
. Through mass media and other ways of promotion, new and unknown
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companies
establish themselves in the market and attract
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consumers
who might want to try their
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product
or
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services
.
Furthermore
, advertising reminds
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customers
of established
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companies
of their existing
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products
as well
as new special offers. This
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helps
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companies
be the
first
option and may increase
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customer
loyalty.

However
,
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quality
also
plays a vital role in a successful
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business
.
After all
, no matter how popular the
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product
or
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services
are by using marketing and promotion, if they are of poor standards then
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consumers
cannot trust the
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company
.
In particular
, most
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consumers
are
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quality
conscious,
therefore
, they will look for an alternative brand that will satisfy their standards.
Moreover
,
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quality
consistency
relatively
builds brand credibility that
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helps
in maintaining loyalty from the
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consumers
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so
they will continue to
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purchase
from the
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company
in the future.

In conclusion
, although advertising is necessary in achieving
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business
success as it is a strategy that attracts
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customers
, I believe that a
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good
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quality
of
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products
and
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services
is
equally
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important
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because
it builds
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consumer
trust and the
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company’s
reputation that maintains the loyalty of its
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customers
,
thus
keeping the
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business
at the top.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay When traveling, do you prefer to stay at one place for a long time or spend less time but visit more places? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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