When people have devoted time or resources to a certain project, they generally want to see it succeed. However, they may grow so attached to the idea of a successful outcome that even if it starts to look like the project will fail and the disadvantages v.1
When people have devoted time or resources to a certain project, they generally want to see it succeed. However, they may grow so attached to the idea of a successful outcome that even if it starts to look like the project will fail and the disadvantages v. 1
Working out is a great way, for boys, girls and adolescents, to get in shape, to prevent overweight related diseases and to socialize more. These days, with the use of cell phones and other technological devices, sedentary lifestyles and communication problems have increased. In my opinion, physical education should be obligatory in every school of the world and in this essay I will explain why.
The first reason is that exercise at schools is an entertaining way to keep in shape by playing games or practicing sports. Ball games, such as volleyball, soccer, softball or baseball, for example, are fun, amusing and an effective fitness activity. Another advantage is that these classes increase socialization skills. Soccer, for example, make children, not only run fast and kick the ball, but also interact with other players, from their own and their opponent team. Consequently, sports at schools become more than just simple exercise, but an effective socializing tool.
Another advantage is that habits introduced in early ages remain for life, increasing active life in the future and preventing, therefore, adulthood diseases such as obesity, diabetes and hypertension. Take for instance, when people learn sports in childhood, they keep on practicing them in the future, remaining lean and healthy for life. Moreover, our body gets used to regular training and needs that healthy habit to feel good.
In conclusion, in my opinion, all schools around the globe should have compulsory gym classes because exercise is essential firstly, to avoid obesity, secondly, to prevent future obesity related diseases, and lastly, to improve children and youth socialization issues.
Working out is a great way, for boys, girls and adolescents, to
get
in shape, to
prevent
overweight related diseases and to socialize more. These days, with the
use
of cell phones and other technological devices, sedentary lifestyles and communication problems have increased. In my opinion, physical education should be obligatory in every
school
of the world and in this essay I will
explain
why.
The
first
reason is that exercise at
schools
is an entertaining way to
keep
in shape by playing games or practicing sports. Ball games, such as volleyball, soccer, softball or baseball,
for example
, are fun, amusing and an effective fitness activity. Another advantage is that these classes increase socialization
skills
. Soccer,
for example
,
make
children, not
only
run
fast
and kick the ball,
but
also
interact with other players, from their
own
and their opponent team.
Consequently
, sports at
schools
become more than
just
simple exercise,
but
an effective socializing tool.
Another advantage is that habits introduced in early ages remain for life, increasing active life in the future and preventing,
therefore
, adulthood diseases such as obesity, diabetes and hypertension. Take
for instance
, when
people
learn sports in childhood, they
keep
on practicing them in the future, remaining lean and healthy for life.
Moreover
, our body
gets
used
to regular training and needs that healthy habit to feel
good
.
In conclusion
, in my opinion, all
schools
around the globe should have compulsory gym classes
because
exercise is essential
firstly
, to avoid obesity,
secondly
, to
prevent
future obesity related diseases, and
lastly
, to
improve
children and youth socialization issues.
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