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When designing a building, the most important thing for architects to consider is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. v. 1
In the recent world, we have seen astonishing miracles of architectural designs and creations. the architect work with design element and space concept to create coherent structures. however, some people believe that an architect should only work on the concept while others think that they shall consider display as well. this essay is written in agreement of the statement that the aesthetics of any structure is important. To begin with, the design engineers are not just engineers who provide only design for the required item or solution to a problem but they are skilled personnel who aesthetically design buildings for efficient utilization of its core purpose. For example, the creation of contemporary art and design Spanish museum Guggenheim is itself a unique structure, the museum space is efficiently consumed to showcase all the art pieces. On the contrary, the planners sometimes consider the outline of the project as a priority and could not entertain the core purpose of place accurately, For instance, the famous state of the art building in the UK fall off because the the architect did not emphasize on foundations of the edifice. A designer of a building shall have unique thinking which can lead him to artistically devise a layout that can potently consume the maximum space for the cause. If the designer neglect uniqueness then his skill might fail.
In the recent world, we have
seen
astonishing miracles of architectural
designs
and creations.
the
architect work with
design
element and space concept to create coherent structures.
however
,
some
people
believe that an architect should
only
work on the concept while others
think
that they shall consider display
as well
.
this
essay
is written
in agreement of the statement that the aesthetics of any structure is
important
.

To
begin
with, the
design
engineers are not
just
engineers who provide
only
design
for the required item or solution to a problem
but
they
are skilled
personnel who
aesthetically
design
buildings for efficient utilization of its core purpose.
For example
, the creation of contemporary art and
design
Spanish museum Guggenheim is itself a unique structure, the museum space is
efficiently
consumed to showcase all the art pieces.

On the contrary
, the planners
sometimes
consider the outline of the project as a priority and could not entertain the core purpose of place
accurately
,
For instance
, the
famous
state of the art
building in the UK fall off
because
the the
architect did not emphasize on foundations of the edifice.

A designer of a building shall have unique thinking which can lead him to
artistically
devise a layout that can
potently
consume the maximum space for the cause. If the designer neglect uniqueness then his
skill
might fail.
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IELTS essay When designing a building, the most important thing for architects to consider is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.

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