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When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. v. 4
It is believed that the usage of a building should be considered as the most important criterion in its design procedure instead of its exterior. In my view, some buildings are especially designed to attract people, transfer a message, or serve as a symbol, while in other buildings, their applications dominate the designing process. Architects usually regard the design of a building’s external appearance as a critical step of their job. Such an importance emerges from the high potential of this part of buildings that can be definitely utilized to give them unique characteristics. For instance, thousands of tourists travel to Sydney to enjoy watching the picturesque external design of this city’s opera house. Additionally, a special message can be transferred through using particular elements in a building’s outward view. To illustrate, the German parliament’s glassy appearance is interpreted as the transparency of relationships between the political parties. Moreover, some building symbolize a country and everyone remembers those buildings whenever they think about that country. For example, the iconic outward design of Burj al Arab in Dubai, which resembles a sailing boat, has become the symbol of this UAE. On the other hand, a huge amount of expenditure on special outward designs cannot be justified as logical for some types of building, since their intended usage preponderates over their appearance. Therefore, in some cases the simplest types of facades have always been selected. For example, the exteriors of industrial warehouses are usually covered by a layer of cement or even bricks. Most of public and official buildings are constructed for special purposes. To illustrate, hospitals’ structures are designed based on regulations which assure their resistance against extreme natural disasters such as earthquakes and floods; as a result, more strict regulations should be considered in their structural design process ― their appearance is not their architectural priority. In conclusion, the outward views of some buildings are a simple architectural element, because in certain cases conceptual appearances have been designed to attract people, symbolize a country, or transfer an idea, whereas in some other buildings, the designers focus on structural factors rather than their exterior appearances ― for the sake of building’s intended usage.
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is believed
that the usage of a
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building
should
be considered
as the most
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important
criterion in its
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design
procedure
instead
of its exterior. In my view,
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some
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buildings
are
especially
designed to attract
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people
, transfer a message, or serve as a symbol, while in other
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buildings
, their applications dominate the designing process.

Architects
usually
regard the
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design
of a
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building’s
external
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appearance
as a critical step of their job. Such an importance emerges from the high potential of this part of
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buildings
that can be definitely utilized to give them unique characteristics.
For instance
, thousands of tourists travel to Sydney to enjoy watching the picturesque external
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design
of this city’s opera
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house
.
Additionally
, a special message can
be transferred
through using particular elements in a
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building’s
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outward
view. To illustrate, the German parliament’s glassy
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appearance
is interpreted
as the transparency of relationships between the political parties.
Moreover
,
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some
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building
symbolize a country and everyone remembers those
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buildings
whenever they
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think
about that country.
For example
, the iconic
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outward
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design
of
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Burj
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al
Arab in Dubai, which resembles a sailing boat, has become the symbol of this UAE.

On the other hand
, a huge amount of expenditure on special
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outward
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designs
cannot
be justified
as logical for
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some
types of
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building
, since their intended usage preponderates over their
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appearance
.
Therefore
, in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cases the simplest types of facades have always
been selected
.
For example
, the exteriors of industrial warehouses are
usually
covered by a layer of cement or even bricks.
Consider using "Most public" or "Most of the public".
Most of public
and official
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buildings
are constructed
for special purposes. To illustrate, hospitals’ structures
are designed
based on regulations which assure their resistance against extreme natural disasters such as earthquakes and floods;
as a result
, more strict regulations should
be considered
in their structural
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design
process ― their
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appearance
is not their architectural priority.

In conclusion
, the
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outward
views of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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buildings
are a simple architectural element,
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because
in certain cases conceptual
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appearances
have
been designed
to attract
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, symbolize a country, or transfer an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
, whereas in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
, the designers focus on structural factors
rather
than their exterior
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
appearances
― for the sake of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building’s
intended usage.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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