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What is the most memorable meal you have had? Describe the experience of eatingthis meal. Use details v.1

What is the most memorable meal you have had? Describe the experience of eatingthis meal. Use details v. 1
It is a fact that, the games played in groups educate the children in a variety of ways. Team spirit and accommodating nature are the most significant character traits, which can be built in students through team sports, which will help them in their future, in terms of relations with people around them. These qualities may not be learnt, in case of the games that are played by a single player, such as badminton or shuttle. To begin with, for a team to win a sport, all the team members have to work together towards a common goal. It needs a lot patience and, years of learning to do this. For example, for a football team to make a goal, the team members must know when to hold or pass the ball. It has to happen spontaneously, because they do not have enough time to communicate, in most of the scenarios. The teammates require a good rapport and understanding among themselves to achieve this. Additionally, people who play team sports understand that, there are strengths and weaknesses to everyone, but as a team they have to work together, without being partial. For example, any sports team consists of players of different heights and ages, but it is their ability to perform, which finally matters to the team and its members. Hence, being a player in a team sport makes a person more accommodating. Playing team sports not only helps students during their early stages, but also in their future life. The people who were in team sports are always the best team players. In addition, they usually have a good social life and a lot of friends because of their inclusive nature. They might stop playing at some point, but they carry forward the lessons they have learned from sports, throughout their life. In conclusion, team sports are very helpful and influential to young minds when compared to the games played by a single or two players. They help in acquiring key skills such as team spirit and friendly nature, which help them the rest of their life. Hence, all the group sports must be encouraged
It is a fact that, the games played in groups educate the children in a variety of ways.
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Team
spirit and accommodating nature are the most significant character traits, which can
be built
in students through
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team
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sports
, which will
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help
them in their future, in terms of relations with
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people
around them. These qualities may not be
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learnt
, in case of the games that
are played
by a single
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player
, such as badminton or shuttle.

To
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begin
with, for a
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team
to win a
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sport
, all the
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team
members
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have to
work together towards a common goal. It needs
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a lot patience
and, years of learning to do this.
For example
, for a football
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team
to
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make
a goal, the
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team
members
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must
know when to hold or pass the ball. It
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has to
happen
spontaneously
,
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because
they do not have
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enough
time to communicate, in most of the scenarios. The teammates require a
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good
rapport and understanding among themselves to achieve this.

Additionally
,
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people
who play
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team
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sports
understand that, there are strengths and weaknesses to everyone,
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but
as a
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team
they
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have to
work together, without being partial.
For example
, any
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sports
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team
consists of
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players
of
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different
heights and ages,
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but
it is their ability to perform, which
finally
matters to the
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team
and its members.
Hence
, being a
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player
in a
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team
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sport
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makes
a person more accommodating.

Playing
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team
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sports
not
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only
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helps
students during their early stages,
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but
also
in their future life. The
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people
who were in
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team
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sports
are always the best
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team
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players
.
In addition
, they
usually
have a
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good
social life and
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a lot of
friends
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because
of their inclusive nature. They might
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stop
playing at
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some
point,
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but
they carry forward the lessons they have learned from
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sports
, throughout their life.

In conclusion
,
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team
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sports
are
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very
helpful and influential to young minds when compared to the games played by a single or two
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players
. They
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help
in acquiring key
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skills
such as
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team
spirit and friendly nature, which
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help
them the rest of their life.
Hence
, all the group
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sports
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must
be encouraged
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IELTS essay What is the most memorable meal you have had? Describe the experience of eatingthis meal. Use details v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
355 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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