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What is the best way to assess students through tests, projects, or class participation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

What is the best way to assess students through tests, projects, or class participation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
It is argued that in businesses, the new staff are not able to cooperate with their colleges appropriately. In this essay I would like to discuss about the reasons of this obstacle and then I will give some solutions to prevent repeating them. There are several reasons leading to cooperative issues. Firstly, The interpersonal skill of new employees may not be trained well before they get a job. For example, In my country, we did not learn about teamwork or emotional intelligence neither in school nor at universities, hence, when we got a job, we will definitely face problems related to cooperation. Secondly, In job interviews, some tests like EQ tests which assess the social skills in persons, may not be taken, resulting in problems with identifying the scarcity of interpersonal skills in employees. Finally, the new employees might not be declared clearly about teamwork or interaction with colleagues. In the first days of new works, new hired workers are not familiar with their task and how to response the requirements that their workmates ask for. These misunderstandings may result in a bad performance of teamwork. However, fortunately there are some solutions for solving this complication. Social skill is taughtable, hence when a person suffers from the lack of interpersonal skill, they can learn them. For instance, the company can offer some compulsory courses before start their jobs. Moreover, they can assess the ability of social skills in candidates in the interview by testing some tests like EQ tests. The most important solution, but is that every individual should learn these types of skills in school. If they are taught emotional skills and the importance of teamwork, they will never face interaction problems. In conclusion, many companies nowadays encounter the scarcity of teamwork skills in their new hired staff, which many reasons lead to this issue. But it is not an unsolvable problem, hence, the employers by some easy ways can deter this problem in the first stages.
It
is argued
that in businesses, the
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new
staff are not able to cooperate with their colleges
appropriately
. In this essay I would like to
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discuss about the
reasons of this obstacle and then I will give
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some
solutions to
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prevent
repeating them.

There are several reasons leading to cooperative issues.
Firstly
, The interpersonal
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skill
of
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new
employees may not
be trained
well
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before
they
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get
a
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job
.
For example
, In my country, we did not learn about
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teamwork
or emotional intelligence neither in school nor at universities,
hence
, when we
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got
a
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job
, we will definitely face
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problems
related to cooperation.
Secondly
, In
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job
interviews,
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some
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tests
like EQ
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tests
which assess the social
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skills
in persons, may not
be taken
, resulting in
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problems
with identifying the scarcity of interpersonal
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skills
in employees.
Finally
, the
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new
employees might not
be declared
clearly
about
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teamwork
or interaction with colleagues. In the
first
days of
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new
works,
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new
hired workers are not familiar with their task and how to response the requirements that their workmates
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ask for
. These misunderstandings may result in a
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bad
performance of teamwork.

However
,
fortunately
there are
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some
solutions for solving this complication. Social
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skill
is
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taughtable
,
hence
when a person suffers from the lack of interpersonal
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skill
, they can learn them.
For instance
, the
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company
can offer
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some
compulsory courses
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before
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start
their
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jobs
.
Moreover
, they can assess the ability of social
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skills
in candidates in the interview by testing
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some
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tests
like EQ
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tests
. The most
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important
solution,
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but
is that every individual should learn these types of
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skills
in school. If they
are taught
emotional
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skills
and the importance of
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teamwork
, they will never face interaction problems.

In conclusion
,
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many
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companies
nowadays encounter the scarcity of
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teamwork
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skills
in their
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new
hired staff, which
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many
reasons lead to this issue.
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But
it is not an unsolvable
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problem
,
hence
, the employers by
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some
easy ways can deter this
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problem
in the
first
stages.
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IELTS essay What is the best way to assess students through tests, projects, or class participation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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