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what important lesson have you learned from your family member? explain the significance of this lesson in your life. include details and examples to support your explanation. v.1

what important lesson have you learned from your family member? explain the significance of this lesson in your life. include details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1
It is considered by some that investing money in the metro is more beneficial rather than improving the condition of roads. I completely subscribe to this notion that the Authority should make railways station for their public to make travelling convenience. Indeed, implementing such strategies related to transportation is a huge challenge for management. The first and foremost reason is convenient and faster routes for travellers who want to travel on a daily basis. By this I mean, only few shuttle trains can carry thousands of passenger either students are going to university or working people are going to their working places at the same time. For illustration, in metro cities, people always use trains to save their valuable time, which can be killed through traffic congestion, if they travel via cars and motorcycle through roads. In fact, the rise in the number of road accidents which are happening every corner of the world due to excessive mode of transportation, can be plummeted. Furthermore, Locomotives tend to be less harmful to the environment. In other words, due to fact that trains can carry hundreds of passengers and this prevents the use of hundreds of internal combustion engines, thus reducing the number of carbon emission. Statistics from credible resources also reveals that few cities in the world are planning to construct underground rail tracks to reduce traffic congestion. Therefore, one of the main benefits related to environment in those cities will be reduced amount of carbon dioxide. In overall, I am strongly convinced that the state should divert more funds to rail lines and spend less on road transportation as this will improve journey times and also imposes a less threat to the environment.
It
is considered
by
some
that investing money in the metro is more beneficial
rather
than improving the condition of
roads
. I completely subscribe to this notion that the Authority should
make
railways station for their public to
make
travelling convenience.
Indeed
, implementing such strategies related to transportation is a huge challenge for management.

The
first
and foremost reason is convenient and faster routes for
travellers
who want to travel on a daily basis. By this I mean,
only
few shuttle trains can carry thousands of passenger either students are going to university or working
people
are going to their working places at the same time. For illustration, in metro cities,
people
always
use
trains to save their valuable time, which can
be killed
through traffic congestion, if they travel via cars and motorcycle through
roads
. In fact, the rise in the number of
road
accidents which are happening every corner of the world due to excessive mode of transportation, can
be plummeted
.

Furthermore
, Locomotives tend to be less harmful to the environment.
In other words
, due to fact that trains can carry hundreds of passengers and this
prevents
the
use
of hundreds of internal combustion engines,
thus
reducing the number of carbon emission. Statistics from credible resources
also
reveals that few cities in the world are planning to construct underground rail
tracks
to
reduce
traffic congestion.
Therefore
, one of the main benefits related to environment in those cities will be
reduced
amount of carbon dioxide.

In
overall
, I am
strongly
convinced that the state should divert more funds to rail lines and spend less on
road
transportation as this will
improve
journey times and
also
imposes a less threat to the environment.
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IELTS essay what important lesson have you learned from your family member? explain the significance of this lesson in your life. include details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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