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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should encourage students to use computers from primary school age on. Use specific reasons and examples to support your response. v.222

Teachers should encourage students to use computers from primary school age on. Use specific reasons and examples to support your response. v. 222
It is believed by some that extinction of some languages annually is not a key area of concern because of the great influence of western expression in the world. I completely subscribe to this notion that learning only a few accents which are more social, can make venerable life. This essay shall elaborate either few language's posses’ enormous effect to society or making diverse culture for people who are living those nations. To embark upon, understanding the complexities of other languages not needed for people who are staying world-wide. This is to say that people will not have to face any difficulty due to wording barrier which leads to uplifting in social interaction on a daily basis. For example, it is often the case that person communication with through foreigner through the social network with English dialect which is considered as international to exchange views and thoughts. Furthermore, having fewer languages makes bilateral relationships among the people of different nationalities who are living across the border. By this I mean, As this trend cuts down social and cultural discrimination among people to great extent as majority of them use as a common terminology in order to maintain the social relationship irrespective of country, religion and so on. For illustration, In England there is little social status among English people, whereas Indian shows remarkable social, cultural and religious discrimination owing to a large number of local voices for each state. In conclusion, I personally opine that learning a single prose makes life more convenient rather than learning multiple languages. In fact, having multiple languages neither reduces social distance nor stress to learn various cultures.
It
is believed
by
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some
that extinction of
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some
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languages
annually
is not a key area of concern
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because
of the great influence of western expression in the world. I completely subscribe to this notion that learning
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only
a few accents which are more
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social
, can
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make
venerable life. This essay shall elaborate either few language's posses’ enormous effect to society or making diverse culture for
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people
who are living those nations.

To embark upon, understanding the complexities of other
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languages
not needed for
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people
who are staying world-wide. This is to say that
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people
will not
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have to
face any difficulty due to wording barrier which leads to uplifting in
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social
interaction on a daily basis.
For example
, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
the case that person communication with through foreigner through the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
network with English dialect which
is considered
as international to exchange views and thoughts.

Furthermore
, having fewer
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languages
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
bilateral relationships among the
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people
of
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different
nationalities who are living across the border. By this I mean, As this trend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cuts
down
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social
and cultural discrimination among
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people
to great extent as
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majority of
them
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use
as a common terminology in order to maintain the
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social
relationship irrespective of country, religion and
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so
on. For illustration, In England there is
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little
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social
status among English
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people
, whereas Indian
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shows
remarkable
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social
, cultural and religious discrimination owing to
Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"
a large number of
local voices for each state.

In conclusion
, I
personally
opine that learning a single prose
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
life more convenient
rather
than learning multiple
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languages
. In fact, having multiple
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languages
neither
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reduces
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
distance nor
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stress
to learn various cultures.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay Teachers should encourage students to use computers from primary school age on. Use specific reasons and examples to support your response. v. 222

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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