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What book or film do you think portrays a country s culture the best Would you recommend it to a foreign friend who wishes to learn and understand that country Describe the book or film and explain why you would recommend it Use specific reasons and detai v.2

What book or film do you think portrays a country s culture the best Would you recommend it to a foreign friend who wishes to learn and understand that country Describe the book or film and explain why you would recommend it Use specific reasons and detai v. 2
The book that genuinely captures the real culture of India is India- The Greastest Invention, which was written by the first prime minister of india, Pandit Jawaharlal Nehru. The intricacies of India’s diversity and undistorted facts of indian history make this book more relevant for any foreigner who wants to learn about India. This book was written over a period of time during when the author actively involved in the struggle for India’s independence from British colonials, so it is unnecessary to reiterate the importance given to freedom struggle in this book. The exact and real history of India that dates back a long before to British invasion has also been documented without any false information, which most other books failed to do so for several reasons. Furthermore, the entire content of this book is validated by prestigious universities all across the world. Distorting history to twist current political situation has become everyday job several indan politicians in this 21st century, and many books were born out of it. Such books have slowly gained popularity and provide contradicting information regarding Indian history is my first reason to suggest an inquring foreigner to stick to Nehru’s book. And my second reason is the simplest grammar with which the book was written and translated to other languages. This enables the reader to visualise the diversity in indian culture, language, food, and so on while reading it. To conclude, ‘India-The Greatest Invention’ is the one and only I would recommend to any foreigner who wants to pick the true essence of India. Documentation of facts of the India’s past and the usage of simplest form of language for any reader to easily understand make this more unique than other indian history books.
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more relevant for any foreigner who wants to learn about India.

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was written
over a period of time during when the author
actively
involved in the struggle for India’s independence from British colonials,
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so
it is unnecessary to reiterate the importance
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given
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book
. The exact and real
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history
of India that dates back a long
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before
to British invasion has
also
been documented
without any false information, which most other
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books
failed to do
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so
for several reasons.
Furthermore
, the entire content of this
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is validated
by prestigious universities all across the world.

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to twist
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current
political situation has become everyday job several
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indan
politicians in this 21st century, and
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were born
out of it. Such
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have
slowly
gained popularity and provide contradicting information regarding Indian
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history
is my
first
reason to suggest an
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inquring
foreigner to stick to Nehru’s
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. And my second reason is the simplest grammar with which the
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was written
and translated to other languages. This enables the reader to
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visualise
the diversity in
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indian
culture, language, food, and
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on while reading it.

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Invention’ is the one and
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I would recommend to any foreigner who wants to pick the true essence of India. Documentation of facts of the India’s past and the usage of
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simplest
form of language for any reader to
easily
understand
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make
this more unique than other
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indian
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history
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.
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IELTS essay What book or film do you think portrays a country s culture the best Would you recommend it to a foreign friend who wishes to learn and understand that country Describe the book or film and explain why you would recommend it Use specific reasons and detai v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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