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What are the good qualities or features of a good newspaper, current affairs television program, or news website? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer. v.1

What are the good qualities or features of a good newspaper, current affairs television program, or news website? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer. v. 1
In this modern era, technological evolutions have paved way to new opportunities in many sectors across the globe and due to which job market has become competitive. These days, workers in many countries tend to extend their hours, which adds a lot of stress. This essay will describe in detail about the various factors which contributes to long hours, its consequences and solution for employers to make their staff's life less stressful. Firstly, companies are encouraging employees to be flexible. This is due to their clients Timezone. They are insisting for longer hours to support their customers, which is the root cause for workers to stretch in office. This is quite common in IT service based industries. On the other hand, textile, automobile and manufacturing industries require workers to stand and work for long hours which creates a tremendous amount of physical stress. For example, people in India, Nepal and Bangladesh typically spend 12 hours a day in textile industries. Secondly, staffs should take care of their well being and try to avoid after office hours. In this generation, lifestyle had been completely changed due to the growth of internet. Many companies force their employees to set up workstation at home. This is impacting family time and often turns out unpleasant among family members at home. Few service sectors provide money in compensation for these extra efforts and in most cases, employees will accept it. This practice rapidly spreads among other employees and eventually to other companies as well. For example, a leading chipset company in India compensates employee with their one day basic salary as their allowance for working on a weekend. To conclude, both employer and employee should be accountable in maintaining maximum of 9 hours per day at the office with breaks at regular intervals to make the job easier. Companies at any cost should not force their workers to do overtime jobs. They should treat workers properly and should take care of their health during unexpected accidents at workplace.
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many
sectors across the globe and due to which job market has become competitive. These days,
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workers
in
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many
countries tend to extend their
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hours
, which
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adds
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a lot of
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stress
. This essay will
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describe
in detail about the various factors which contributes to long
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hours
, its consequences and solution for employers to
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make
their staff's life less stressful.

Firstly
,
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companies
are encouraging
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employees
to be flexible. This is due to their clients Timezone. They are insisting for longer
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hours
to support their customers, which is the root cause for
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workers
to stretch in office. This is quite common in IT service based industries.
On the other hand
, textile, automobile and manufacturing industries require
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workers
to stand and work for long
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hours
which creates a tremendous amount of physical
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stress
.
For example
,
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people
in India, Nepal and Bangladesh
typically
spend 12
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hours
a day in textile industries.

Secondly
, staffs should take care of their
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well being
and try to avoid after office
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hours
. In this generation, lifestyle had been completely
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changed
due to the growth of internet.
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Many
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companies
force their
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employees
to set up workstation at home. This is impacting family time and
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often
turns out unpleasant among family members at home. Few service sectors provide money in compensation for these extra efforts and
in most cases
,
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employees
will accept it. This practice
rapidly
spreads among other
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employees
and
eventually
to other
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companies
as well
.
For example
, a leading chipset
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company
in India compensates
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employee
with their
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one day
basic salary as their allowance for working on a weekend.

To conclude
, both employer and
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employee
should be accountable in maintaining maximum of 9
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hours
per day at the office with breaks at regular intervals to
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make
the job easier.
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Companies
at any cost should not force their
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workers
to do overtime jobs. They should treat
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workers
properly
and should take care of their health during unexpected accidents at workplace.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay What are the good qualities or features of a good newspaper, current affairs television program, or news website? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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