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what are the characteristics of a good neighbor? support your response with examples and details v.1

what are the characteristics of a good neighbor? support your response with examples and details v. 1
Some people prefer to use a car to get about while others opt for the bicycle. In my opinion, both modes of transport have their merits and demerits. However, I prefer the bicycle for travelling short distances. The biggest advantage of bicycles is that they are an eco-friendly mode of transport. They do not emit any greenhouse gases or pollute the air. Bicycles are also a cheap mode of transport because they do not require any fuel. Another advantage of riding a bicycle is that it is healthy. It helps burn excess calories and prevents health problems like obesity and heart trouble. However, bicycles do have some downsides. To start with, bicycle riding is a physically demanding task and as such it is not suitable for travelling long distances. Another disadvantage is that bicycles do not provide any protection from rain or shine. Cars, by contrast, are the ultimate in comfort. They allow people to travel in an air-conditioned environment and provide adequate protection from inclement weather. In addition, cars are fast and perfect for covering long distances in a short period of time. However, they have some serious disadvantages. For one thing, travelling by car is expensive. For another, cars pollute the air. Actually, studies have shown that automobiles are the number one cause of air pollution. They also cause road congestion. To sum up, both cars and bicycles have their pluses and minuses. Personally, I would prefer a bicycle if the journey is short and the weather is good. For travelling long distances, I will always take a car.
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about while others opt for the
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bicycle
. In my opinion, both modes of transport have their merits and demerits.
However
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bicycle
for
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bicycles
is that they are an eco-friendly mode of transport. They do not emit any greenhouse gases or pollute the air.
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mode of transport
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they do not require any fuel. Another advantage of riding a
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bicycle
is that it is healthy. It
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helps
burn excess calories and
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health problems like obesity and heart trouble.
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with,
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riding is a
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travelling
long distances. Another disadvantage is that
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bicycles
do not provide any protection from rain or shine.

Cars, by contrast, are the ultimate in comfort. They
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allow
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to travel in an air-conditioned environment and provide adequate protection from inclement weather.
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and perfect for covering long distances in a short period of time.
However
, they have
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some
serious disadvantages. For one thing,
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travelling
by
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car
is expensive. For another,
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cars
pollute the air. Actually, studies have shown that automobiles are the number one cause of air pollution. They
also
cause road congestion.

To sum up, both
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and
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bicycles
have their pluses and minuses.
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, I would prefer a
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if the journey is short and the weather is
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. For
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long distances, I will always take a
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car
.
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IELTS essay what are the characteristics of a good neighbor? support your response with examples and details v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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