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Ex: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Ex: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. v. 1
Language is a way to communicate ideas, thoughts, and opinions with other people. English is one of the languages that is often considered essential to learn in today’s world, while there is a considerable decline in the interest in learning the local languages. Some of them are on the verge of dying out. This essay believes that everyone must learn English. At the same time, it is equally important to preserve local languages. Firstly, English is the official language in more than 50 countries, most of which are well-developed nations where one might be interested in settling down in the future. For example, since the English speaking countries such as the US, the UK, and Canada are considered to be the best destinations for higher education, One must have a strong command of the language in order to thrive in an English speaking country successfully. Besides, this skill is fundamental in this age of globalization as the clients of the employers are often from different parts of the world. Good knowledge of English is also required to make the best use of information available on the internet because most of the websites are in English. However, the essay thinks the local languages should also be taught to preserve them for future generations. There are many scriptures and books written in local languages that are full of knowledge and wisdom. For example, the books on Ayurveda, a traditional healing practice, are written in Sanskrit. As many people are leaning towards natural healing therapy, it has become all the more important to learn and preserve the minority languages that allow us to decipher such ancient texts. Including these languages in the school curriculum is one of the ways to preserve them. To conclude, learning English is necessary to succeed in all walks of life, and the local language also needs to be given due respect. This essay feels an equal effort should be made by individuals to learn both these languages.
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is a way to communicate
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ideas
, thoughts, and opinions with other
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people
. English is one of the
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languages
that is
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often
considered essential to
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learn
in
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today
’s world, while there is a considerable decline in the interest in learning the
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local
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languages
.
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Some
of them are on the verge of dying out. This essay believes that everyone
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must
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learn
English. At the same time, it is
equally
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important
to
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preserve
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local
languages.

Firstly
, English is the official
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language
in more than 50 countries, most of which are well-developed nations where one might
be interested
in settling down in the future.
For example
, since the
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English speaking
countries such as the US, the UK, and Canada
are considered
to be the best destinations for higher education, One
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must
have a strong command of the
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language
in order to thrive in an
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English speaking
country
successfully
.
Besides
, this
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skill
is fundamental in this age of globalization as the clients of the employers are
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often
from
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different
parts of the world.
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knowledge of English is
also
required to
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make
the best
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use
of information available on the internet
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because
most of the websites are in English.

However
, the essay
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thinks
the
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local
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languages
should
also
be taught
to
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preserve
them for future generations. There are
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many
scriptures and books written in
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local
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languages
that are full of knowledge and wisdom.
For example
, the books on Ayurveda, a traditional healing practice,
are written
in Sanskrit. As
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many
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people
are leaning towards natural healing therapy, it has become all the more
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important
to
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learn
and
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preserve
the minority
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languages
that
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allow
us to decipher such ancient texts. Including these
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languages
in the school curriculum is one of the ways to
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preserve
them.

To conclude
, learning English is necessary to succeed in all walks of life, and the
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local
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language
also
needs to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
due respect. This essay feels an equal effort should
be made
by individuals to
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learn
both these
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languages
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Ex: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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