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What are some important qualities of a good politician (president, prime minister, or elected government official)? Use details and examples to support your explanation. v.2

What are some important qualities of a good politician (president, prime minister, or elected government official)? Use details and examples to support your explanation. v. 2
Our countries are an important part of our lives, It’s where we live and work. Any thing that affect our country, it will affect us directly. Politicians are important people who run our countries, they should have speacial caracteristics to be in those positions. Some people think that a politician should be honest. Others think that he should have courage. In my view, I believe that a politician should be smart person for two important reasons. The main reason is that a smart politician will lead country to the success. No matter the politician position is (president, governor, or senator), they all should be samrt to run their positions in a way that help the country to be the best among others. For example, I would talk a bout the Turkey’s president. Before the current president about 10 years ago, Turkey was in great dept and her economy was not good at all. The people there elect Rajab Ardoghan, the current president. He was an intelligent person and he work hard to push the country to move on the success road. He was able after five years, from being president, to pay all the Turkey dept, increase the economy, and put Turkey among the best 20 countries that person would live in. As you could see, one person was able to change the desteny of millions of his citizens. Second, the politician represent the people whom elect him. A smart politician would be the best person to represent others. For instance, I will talk about my country, I’m an Iraqi Woman. After the war in 2003, we have many people elected as a president. The worse one is the current president, Almaliki Noori. This president lack of any knowledge, doesn’t finish any college, and his talk is doesn’t show that he is smart at all. When he has a meeting with other president, he always use so low language and show lack of presteage and knowledge. I feel shame when anybody talks about him because I don’t feel that, this person represented me. In conclusion, Our countries are important to us and we should all choose the right politician to run it. The right one should be smart. Not only does he lead the country to success but he also represent all people in that country. That’s why we should all vote only for people who have the knowledge.
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country
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.
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Politicians
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people
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, they should have
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speacial
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caracteristics
to be in those positions.
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Some
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people
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think
that a
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politician
should be honest. Others
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think
that he should have courage. In my view, I believe that a
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politician
should be
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smart
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person
for two
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important
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The main reason is that a
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smart
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politician
will lead
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country
to the success. No matter the
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position is (president, governor, or senator), they all should be
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samrt
to run their positions in a way that
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help
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country
to be the best among others.
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a bout the Turkey’s president.
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Before
the
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current
president about 10 years ago, Turkey was in great dept and her economy was not
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good
at all. The
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people
there elect
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Rajab
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Ardoghan
, the
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current
president. He was an intelligent
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person and
he work
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hard
to push the
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country
to
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move
on the success road. He was able after five years, from being president, to pay all the Turkey dept, increase the economy, and put Turkey among the best 20
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countries
that
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person
would
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live
in. As you could
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was able to
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change
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desteny
of millions of his citizens.

Second, the
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represent the
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people
whom elect him. A
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smart
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politician
would be the best
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person
to represent others.
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, I will
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talk
about my
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country
, I’m an Iraqi Woman. After the war in 2003, we have
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many
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people
elected as a president. The worse one is the
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current
president,
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Almaliki
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Noori
. This president lack of any knowledge, doesn’t finish any college, and his
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talk
is doesn’t
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show
that he is
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smart
at all. When he has a meeting with
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other
president, he always
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use
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low language and
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lack of
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presteage
and knowledge. I feel shame when anybody
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talks
about him
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person
represented me.

In conclusion
, Our
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countries
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important
to
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us and
we should all choose the right
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politician
to run it. The right one should be
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smart
. Not
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only
does he lead the
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country
to success
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he
also
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represent
all
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people
in that
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. That’s why we should all vote
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only
for
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people
who have the knowledge.
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46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
The most intimate temper of a people, its deepest soul, is above all in its language.
Jules Michelet

IELTS essay What are some important qualities of a good politician (president, prime minister, or elected government official)? Use details and examples to support your explanation. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
399 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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