To start with, the ratio of crime and terrorism is being so increased exponentially. People feel unsafe, even being in their own homes. Criminals show no compassion or mercy to those who are being held by them as captives. I do not know what they get by doing such heinous and diabolical acts. In my opinion, the death penalty should be made as an essential punishment for those criminals and insurgents who love to annihilate the humanity or the society we live in, where people get massacred brutally just like flies in the air. The good example of this is in most of the middle-eastern countries where criminals get beheaded or hanged publicly for their wrongdoings, that is why their crime ratio is equivalent to almost zero. Crime is, after all, a crime, irrespective of how big or small it is. By this, I mean that adopting such policies might frighten those criminals and make them think at least ten times before bringing any kind of furore among citizen and annihilate them.
On the other hand, many people or activists think that criminals are also humans so they also deserve another chance to rectify themselves to become a better citizen in future.
From these facts, I would maintain that no human being happens to be an insurgent, criminal or terrorist by birth. It is just the time which plays as the best teacher for some and worst for some.
To
start
with, the ratio of
crime
and terrorism is being
so
increased
exponentially
.
People
feel unsafe, even being in their
own
homes.
Criminals
show
no compassion or mercy to those who are
being held
by them as captives. I do not know what they
get
by doing such heinous and diabolical acts. In my opinion, the death penalty should
be made
as an essential punishment for those
criminals
and insurgents who
love
to annihilate the humanity or the society we
live
in, where
people
get
massacred
brutally
just
like flies in the air. The
good
example of this is in most of the middle-eastern countries where
criminals
get
beheaded or hanged
publicly
for their wrongdoings,
that is
why their
crime
ratio is equivalent to almost zero.
Crime
is,
after all
, a
crime
, irrespective of how
big
or
small
it is. By this, I mean that adopting such policies might frighten those
criminals
and
make
them
think
at least ten times
before
bringing any kind of
furore
among citizen and annihilate them.
On the other hand
,
many
people
or activists
think
that
criminals
are
also
humans
so
they
also
deserve another chance to rectify themselves to become a better citizen
in future
.
From these facts, I would maintain that no human being happens to be an insurgent,
criminal
or terrorist by birth. It is
just
the time which plays as the best teacher for
some
and worst for
some
.
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10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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